Addiction

I want you gone so why are you still holding on I don't need you any more! so let me go, go on I've shown you the door I've found peace, within the grace of God this love is so much more than you could ever try to endure My freedom is awaiting me please.... I beg you, set me free I DON'T EVER WANT YOU ANY MORE DO YOU NOT SEE I'M NO LONGER YOURS... I have been set free redeemed, by my God

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Ravi Sharma

Date: 3/3/2019 4:31:00 AM

Amazingly written. It touched me a lot.

D.A Hopkins
Date: 3/26/2019 1:02:00 AM

Thank you. I do have issues as does everyone, but I share in hope that if it can help 1 other person I have succeeded.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/3/2019 12:50:00 AM

addiction! on to the grace of GOD!/// amazingly used the word is in poetic expression

D.A Hopkins
Date: 3/26/2019 1:03:00 AM

Thank you very much and hope you enjoy more of my work.

John Ginesi

Date: 7/5/2013 2:15:00 AM

Hi Denise, I like the approach on this poem, direct action, it sounds like you are driving the Devil away from you, it is almost done in an amusing way, you have a flair for this and maybe you could write some humorous poems it may be a good challenge for you, it is sometimes difficult to do romantic poems, as I don't do too many myself, but this is very good, all the best. John