Addiction

Mottled bodies inside and out
Needled veins black and about
Eyes dark through unsleepened nights
Lying in door ways that's about right.

Bottles and tins surround my life
Once i was married, no longer have wife
Kids disown me as i lie there spent
Confused they are where the family has went.

The above is not me, if you don't mind me saying
Its a vision of life, for the ones who start playing
Who take that fork they meet on the road
Again the doorways no family abode.

Many a home in this modern world
Hit by life's Tornado's in never ending twirls
Some see the light at the end of the tunnel
Some down the drain, in a spiralling funnel.

Society seems to breed the above
Are they really the clever, who absorb that first shove
To be an Addict as you walk down that road
Be ever so brave, ignore that goad.

Live strong, live free
An Addicts life is what you don't want to be
Sometimes, don't think of you, think of others
Or they remember you under an earthly cover.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 8:22 AM
sad truth which makes me more scared getting involved and such am much careful.. Addiction comes in many forms but it depends on discipline amd control that you can get away from this..i hooe the best addiction peoole can havr is being kind
Fraser Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Music & poetry are my likes, never an addiction. If I do become an addict, the afore mentioned will be my ails, and koolio ails they'll be, James :)
Neels Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 9:25 AM
So much truth to this write many have lost everything by kidding themselves into thinking they can try it once and walk away. It's all about choice, love it James
Jacobson Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 3:46 AM
I relate to this in so many ways i would like to hear more from your collection inspire me..
Nolan Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 1:05 PM
Very interesting view from "The above is not me, if you don't mind me saying" this reminds me of something I would write. Well done
Stella Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 9:07 AM
congrats jim on this being featured this week well written and remember were only addictive if we chose to follow that devil giving us the power we got not to give up the fight thanks for sharing and for your kindest comments blessings to you and family
Moreno Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 3:01 AM
James, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
Sheart Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 3:45 PM
Strong, powerful poem with a good message. Congrats on your feature write this week. Keep writing I'll keep reading. Love Light Truth Patricia
Gass Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 1:36 PM
Very moving piece, James. So many lives are touched by this devistating problem. So sad. Congratulations on this heart touching poem being featured this week! Love, Robin
Austin Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 8:31 AM
As a retired school teacher I can tell you I've seen too much of what family disaster can bring. Congrats on this fine selection. Love, daver
 Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 4:35 PM
Powerful poem with a good message. The rhyme works well. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep on writing! Wishing your continued success. Karen
Peranteau Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 10:12 AM
What an intoxicating(<-pun) write Mr. Fraser ! I may have been a bit cynical here Sir,..but for good thought,..your poem speaks what is right ! Congratulations having this great write featured !! james
Richards Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 8:06 AM
Such a thought provoking and timely poem. Well deserving a featured role this week. Congratulations James. ~ Carrie
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 4:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol
Goff Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 3:20 AM
a fitting tome... nice feature! James!... jim
Strand Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 11:22 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week James.Rgds Brian
Bien Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 7:07 PM
congrats on being featured. JB
Kendrick Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 3:23 PM
Nicely written. Illegal drug use is a part of life in the states now. A Sad state of affairs. Sara
Chachere Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 4:30 PM
It is horrible how we create such things.that can destroy us so quickly. Great write James.~Lynette
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 6:12 PM
Sad, there are so many. Most don't understand until it is too late. Vince
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 5:19 AM
James - Good point made in this poem.. I'm glad that you clarified that it is ot you. Or else you may have received a pundit leacture about saying no to drugs. (Smiling out loud.) Drugs lead to death too often. May God bless you as you bless the world with your words. Always, Dane
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