Adapting To the Good Life - Or

Schmooze me darling, my appetite is rapt. Drinks with umbrellas - a tropical freeze. Cruise for teal blue waters whilst I adapt. Shrinks the mainland - aims towards* coconut trees. Muse takes the wheel - island adventure mapped. Winks his erotic eye - how wild the seas. Weather for sailing - no longer a wreck, Tether me, baby, to your wafting deck.
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May Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Beautifully done Kim..Congrats on your win..
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 8:46 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Messina Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 2:21 PM
This is a great entry Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs ~Charlie
Rodrigues Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 8:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charles!
Gondolf Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 1:06 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. I enjoyed this romantic poem with a little touch of sensuality. All my best. John
Rodrigues Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 7:59 PM
Thank you, John! Hugs...Kim
Lamoureux Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 10:02 AM
You did this so well!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 1:33 PM
Thank you, Richard! :)
Proxenos Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 9:48 AM
Rima Ottova poetry form I am not familiar with, but enjoyed this poem and wish you all the best in the contest. Hugs, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 1:33 PM
Thank you, Jennifer :)
Romios Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 2:25 AM
Wonderful poem Kim. As always your imagery and combinations with feelings are magic. Thank you and good luck. Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 5:39 AM
Thank you so much, Panagiota!
Wolf Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 5:06 PM
This is just great. I have no clue about 'Ottova rima,' but what you've written, especially the last two lines, packs a real wallop! ~ First mate, Gerhson
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 5:17 PM
Thanks, Gershon! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Kim, you are either always on vacation, or your mind is always at the Caribbean. Love it!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 5:18 PM
My mind is there! Cruising the NorthEast in the fall...it’s been 18 months...we’re getting jittery lol
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