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Adam's First Date

She dug into the garden of Eden A first of thirst longing for hidden thrust Curves of sweet blossomed hors d'oeuvre to feed in Charmed beauty or was it only pure lust Fragrance of passion and romance for sure A bee line drew for one bite of the taste He did not know yet for love was no cure Only that pleasure was not being chaste No censorship hiding sensual fruit When lips met tempting skin and licked the juice Wondrous symphony thus entered his flute Unbeknown Adam discovered the truth Of allergy to dates breathless he teased Allegorical peaches to be pleased 11th February 2018 Written for contest ‘A first Date’ sponsored by Brenda Chiri

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/13/2018 5:30:00 PM
An allergy to die for. Lol Kai what a sensual write,loved it. I can see this doing very well in the contest,WINNER stamped all over it, nevertheless good luck....Maria
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/15/2018 3:45:00 AM
Thank you Maria. I appreciate you reading this and commenting. Adam lives and so does Eva. Whatever our belief system is, we can all aim for the message of love. Kai
Date: 2/11/2018 1:59:00 PM
Some first date! Holy Toledo. Fantastically tied together. If this one doesn't win...they need a shot of Viagra or at least a bite of the apple.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/12/2018 4:09:00 AM
Viagra for the message recipients, that is funny. When all one need is an apple and a date with one's loved ones...
Date: 2/11/2018 7:00:00 AM
A unique them and lovely poem..best for a win, Kai.
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Date: 2/11/2018 6:58:00 AM
This is a great poem! God luck in the contest!
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