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Adamantine State

Pernicious weapons shall not devastate An unvanquishable nation, an indestructible state Lust for blood rips thousands’ bodies apart Each slaughtered by a master of slaying art Salvaged from inhumanity of humankind They rise to Heaven for eternal peace of mind Into the air, their invincible spirits float “Never give up”, with their blood they wrote Eternity will witness the victory we await

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/15/2013 5:20:00 AM
well done keep up the good work
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Date: 6/3/2010 12:17:00 PM
Nice use of the acrostic form. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Sarah. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2010 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Sarah. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2010 7:43:00 AM
May congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/4/2010 4:33:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, good one!!
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Date: 4/4/2010 3:22:00 PM
Thought provoking poem. Good use of imagery. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/4/2010 1:22:00 PM
Sarah, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 4/4/2010 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem. Post some more. Ernilando
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