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Adamantine

I'm a lighthouse that has weathered violent storms;

         A tree still unfelled by the blows of an axe.

        Despite blows by life's battering ram, I am ...

                          quite adamantine.

          My faith is a chain that will never sever.

          My spirit, tantamount to a rubber band.

          Stretched, it returns to its original form.

                            It's adamantine.



STRAND PICK J,ANY THEME,ANY FORM Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date written: 04/28/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Makama Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 10:57 PM
deep, deep, deep.. Just so deep and insightful. "My spirit, tantamount to a rubber band". Great line here.
Ibeh Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 11:23 PM
Thank you so much, Funom:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 10:32 AM
Hello Edward, This poem you created shows me strength. This is needed in a time like this. Also will be my fav. Enjoy your day my fiend. I hope you are well. Enjoy your day my fiend.
Ibeh Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 1:06 PM
Wow, I'm very glad you liked this poem enough to FAV and frame it, Darlene:-) Thank you very much indeed!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 1:36 PM
Hello Edward, I want you to know that i wrote this poem out on paper and then I framed it. So I could readit when i need it. Be safe. Enjoy your day my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 11:41 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and the fav, Darlene:-) All is well, my friend! Enjoy your day, too.
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