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ADAM AND EVE

First biological parents, Adam and Eve to each other and for one another, they did cleave created by God with His workmanship* divine yet, they failed midst human nature’s whine. First couple in their love’s partnership zest both resided in great paradise crest enjoying full blessings’ gain but soon were banished in pain when temptation won during their pride’s test. Adam and Eve established first home on earth Along first family’s children of precious worth… Despite domestic conflicts, and relationship’s pleasure Mankind now thrives since they multiply beyond measure.
*Ephesians 2:10 For we are his workmanship, created in Christ Jesus unto good works, which God hath before ordained that we should walk in them. July 9, 2024 15th place, "Clerimerick Couplets (hybrid form)" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Mark Toney; judged on 7/21/2024

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Date: 2/23/2025 2:28:00 AM
interesting read. congratulations on FPC win dear poet.
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Date: 2/22/2025 11:45:00 AM
Beata, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Challenge (10). Your poem was randomly chosen to be featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. I enjoyed seeing this one again!
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Date: 7/21/2024 8:11:00 PM
Beata, what a brilliant choice for the contest. Mark Massey was right. I enjoyed reading this. Congratulations on your win!
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/23/2024 3:36:00 AM
Thanks so much for the prompt and for the placement... as well as for the uplifting comment. God bless you
Date: 7/14/2024 10:40:00 AM
This one will take you back a few years…excellent entry, Beata. Mark will enjoy reading this one!
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/23/2024 3:37:00 AM
Thanks so for the uplifting comment. God bless you.
Date: 7/10/2024 4:17:00 AM
Creative work. If we had been there, I think anyone of us would have messed up just like them. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/23/2024 3:37:00 AM
Thanks so for the uplifting comment. God bless you.

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