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Adam and Eve

Adam tasked with naming Eden’s spectacle. all was very good - even quite respectable. Eve named the mother of all living things after she bit the fruit of good and evil’s seed. Costly to the only couple - the serpent’s cling.

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2019 10:07:00 AM

Many congrats kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2019 10:09:00 AM

Thank you, Jan! xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2019 7:22:00 PM

Congrats for your win, Kim . you chose THE number one couple in Bible history!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2019 8:46:00 PM

Thank you!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/17/2019 4:51:00 PM

I agree with Carolyn, Kim; this could have placed higher had it not been for a momentary lapsus:) Congratulations. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2019 8:46:00 PM

Thank you, Paul!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2019 6:19:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Thanks for the visit to my page to say congrats. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2019 9:12:00 AM

You’re welcome! Thank you!

Charles Messina

Date: 1/16/2019 6:22:00 PM

If only she hadn't taken a bite...lol Nice one, Kim Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2019 8:04:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2019 5:12:00 PM

I enjoyed this Kim. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2019 5:20:00 PM

Thank you, Connie!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2019 2:29:00 PM

Kim, I kept hoping you would change the rhyme scheme to AABB. If you had, your clerihew would have placed higher. Congratulations on your placement. Best wishes, Carolyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2019 2:34:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn! Somehow I missed that! I was looking at the “Types of Poems” page where they said usually only the first name is used...oops.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 1/16/2019 12:35:00 PM

Kim, you nailed the genesis of all our subsequent problems - ha! Great entry for the contest! Thx for stopping by to comment on What Did You Do In The War, Daddy. Some guys got cushy jobs like this dude had and never faced incoming fire! - Bob

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2019 2:34:00 PM

Thank you, Robert!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/13/2019 10:08:00 PM

A 'biting commentary!' … G.L. in the contest, Kim! Best wishes, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2019 10:13:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2019 11:44:00 AM

Interesting take on the contest, very clever..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2019 7:56:00 AM

Thank you, Silent :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/11/2019 5:18:00 PM

The family that made it all happen, or not / Nice clerihew Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2019 7:21:00 PM

Thank you, Pixie!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/11/2019 5:00:00 PM

Very clever and memorable, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2019 7:21:00 PM

Thank you, CayCay!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2019 4:26:00 PM

Good work..Way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender. The one that I wrote wasn't for the contest. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2019 4:38:00 PM

Thanks, Sara! <3 Kim

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/11/2019 3:59:00 PM

Hi Kim, I see you chose the "first" couple. You did a good job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2019 4:39:00 PM

The first and only one at the time. Thank you!

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 1/11/2019 3:39:00 PM

Kim, why did you say "a flying hearse" to my poem? Where I live a cruiser is a police car, not an airplane. Set me straight, please. Nice clerihew BTW. Best to you in Caroline's contest. / M

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2019 3:41:00 PM

Thank you, Maurice!