Adam

Who am I
  but a prototype of my Creator

      He breathed His life 
      into my being

  Listen to the breath
  in my voice

      It will tell you who I am
      a finished product of my Creator
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Brotherton Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:38 PM
We are the prototype and the finished product of our Creator. Powerful words my friend.
Wolf Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:40 PM
Jerry, thank you for letting me know how this poem impacted you. ~ Descendant of Adam
Seeker Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 9:16 PM
Wise words, gw. Now all that remains is to find out the true essence of our being, obviously resident within.
Wolf Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:44 PM
Ego, ergo nihilo!
Hawkins Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 8:09 PM
But chose not to be perfect like his creator. Like all of us that followed.
Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Well, he was given the choice... And so are we ...
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