Actors in Love

Ah romance — such an elevated form of make-believe,
with promises and roses that are rarely kept.
Two players, both knowing, smiles just as wily,
each coming closer, each stinging a lie.

They say love’s a puzzle, some misty dance,
but more likely it feels like an enterprise, a turn –
a wink and a promise neither has any right to make,
only two clever souls with a ruse to follow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ashley Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 12:48 PM
Dear Ramon, "actors in love" (I adore the title), captures the deceptive illusion of romantic performers, instead of the devotion of romantic partners, where love is more strategy and heart-less gestures than genuine connection and heartfelt affectionate. Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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November 26, 2024 at 3:52 PM
Thank you!
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