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Acrostic : My Pakistan

My land is culturally richest,
Yes not as bloody as canvased!

Purely we follow the same lord,
At same time we offer, so faith is restored!

Knotted in holy month to fast, all together,
In my home, religious values still haven’t blur!

So we speak different languages but,
The followers of same prophet!

And we have the different skin color,
Nationally but we are alike, greener!

In my home, hospitality for which people dote,
Nobly I say religion we culturally denote!

And the love imparted in closely knitted families
So rich, but live only under father’s monopolies!

I make hackneyed proclamation of beauty of my home,
Anchoring the same ship, we stand under the same dome!

Copyright © Hina Nasir | Year Posted 2014

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Kelly Deschler Date: 10/14/2014 12:15:00 AM It is nice, and so refreshing, to see someone being so proud of their country, instead of complaining about it. This was a very well written acrostic poem. Nice work, Hina! :) Login to Reply Hina Nasir Date: 10/18/2014 6:16:00 AM THNAKYOUso much kelly my friend, for the comment

Saba Khan Date: 10/10/2014 2:58:00 AM Hey Hina. Seeing you after a looooooong time ;) This is just love yar! Awesome! Pakistan Zindabad :) :) :) Login to Reply Hina Nasir Date: 10/12/2014 1:03:00 PM SO GLAD TO SEE YOU in coment section ... after sooo long ...kasii hai ? :-) i was just going to email you ...:-)

Akash Ripper Date: 10/9/2014 5:28:00 AM very nice poem hina, i am from india and i m touched, i know we have good as well as fanatics on both side,,we both are but the same, fooled by politicians at will.. do feel free to visit my poems..:) Login to Reply Hina Nasir Date: 10/9/2014 3:21:00 PM thankyou so much for commenting and im glad that you liked it , specially being an indian this is astonishing yet pleasing :-) and yet could nt agree more about what you said, but i guess somewhere , the faults and flaws also rests on everybody as an individual ... thanks again for appreciating , will soon read your other poems as well.

Ma Yaseen Date: 9/20/2014 6:29:00 AM Go Green, A patriotic poem Dear, a nice write up. I enjoyed reading the poem.. thumbs up I also agree with S. zaynub that there are hands behind triggering the cracks and making fractions of a united brotherhood but at the same time we are also responsible as we let them to divide. May Allah protect you and all.. keep striking your pen for the betterment of one and all. friend always,,, Malik Login to Reply Hina Nasir Date: 9/20/2014 10:51:00 AM well that was meant for s. zaynub ...but thanks for comenting Hina Nasir Date: 9/20/2014 10:48:00 AM hye neihbour :-)...this is releiving that there is still somebody out there who dig truth out of media propogation , you are so right , the one who controls media , controls the mind , and where is 60 percent of population with almost almost no education then obviously they would get toyed in hands of media , and who controls it ...you better know :-) and trust me , where i live , not some areas , most of the provinces are quite terror free and peaceful...thanks for commenting :-)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 9/15/2014 1:16:00 PM I always feel that there is sth true about the rumours that someone outsider is playin divide n rule and makin muslims fight each other and thus cause their elimination by themselves. But i admire yor nice patriotic poem since im sure there are still many parts of pakstan that are brotherly religious and peacefuly great. So nice to write u again. Login to Reply Hina Nasir Date: 9/20/2014 10:53:00 AM hye neihbour :-)..by mistake, i re replied it in another comment ..lol...this is releiving that there is still somebody out there who can dig truth out of media propogation , you are so right , the one who controls media , controls the mind , and where is 60 percent of population with almost almost no education then obviously they would get toyed in hands of media , and who controls it ...you better know :-) and trust me , where i live , not some areas , most of the provinces are quite terror free and peaceful...thanks for commenting :-)