Glenn Sentes Poet Acrostic

Across Ticks of Losing

Menaced by a triumphant chanting of lament
Entrancing the soul of Hades’ kin
Missed eruptions of the sensory nerves
Onomatopoeic of hollow gongs 
Resonating, maimed through the indescribable facets of
Your  forgotten youth.


Adjudged 3rd Place in Black Eyed Susan's Acrostic Contest
© 07-31-2012

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Robert Pettit August 14, 2012 at 2:30 AM Congratulations on winning with this fine entry.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2012 at 6:46 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Lost" contest Glenn. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A August 9, 2012 at 9:03 PM gs.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD

Black Eyed Susan August 9, 2012 at 7:50 AM Congratulations on your win in my contest! I liked "missed eruptions..." :)

Joyce Johnson August 8, 2012 at 7:16 PM Losing your memory is losing everything. Great write and congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2012 at 3:42 PM A great loss to write of, forgotten youth. that's a topic close to my heart. Congrats on your win.

Joann Grisetti August 8, 2012 at 7:36 AM Very clever title. Congratulations on your winning poem.