Across the Miles

soft pale-cool rises high disappears… the moon returns to say good afternoon

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Deb M

Date: 5/15/2022 9:26:00 AM

Gershon I find this poem really sweet……Lovely! Debx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/15/2022 6:37:00 PM

The poem finds you sweet as well, Deb. Cheers, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/13/2022 2:48:00 PM

got to love the thoughtfulness of the moon

Mike Bayles

Date: 5/13/2022 9:32:00 AM

Very nice. I enjoy seeing the poem in the afternoon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/13/2022 4:04:00 PM

Thanks for the intriguing comment, Mike. Have a great weekend! ~ Gershon

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/13/2022 12:04:00 AM

My grandson has been quick to point out the moon in late afternoon, always a good sign arriving for work early lol. Tom

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/12/2022 8:03:00 PM

I always marvel when I see the moon in the day sky, feeling like it is very special.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/12/2022 8:00:00 PM

I always say good day to the moon when I catch her in the blue! Never tried imagism, I like this piece a lot! xomo

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/12/2022 7:58:00 PM

I had to fave this one...It made me feel that sense of primordial gravitas When the pocketed moon stares at me and I stare back I say thank you for your beautiful sight! Have a good night!