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Across the Miles

soft
     pale-cool
     rises high
     disappears…
     the moon
     returns
     to say
     good afternoon

goodbyehellomoonimagism

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Deb M

May 15, 2022 at 9:26 AM

Gershon I find this poem really sweet……Lovely! Debx

Gershon Wolf

May 15, 2022 at 6:37 PM

The poem finds you sweet as well, Deb. Cheers, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

May 13, 2022 at 2:48 PM

got to love the thoughtfulness of the moon

Mike Bayles

May 13, 2022 at 9:32 AM

Very nice. I enjoy seeing the poem in the afternoon.

Gershon Wolf

May 13, 2022 at 4:04 PM

Thanks for the intriguing comment, Mike. Have a great weekend! ~ Gershon

Tom Cunningham

May 13, 2022 at 12:04 AM

My grandson has been quick to point out the moon in late afternoon, always a good sign arriving for work early lol. Tom

L Milton Hankins

May 12, 2022 at 8:03 PM

I always marvel when I see the moon in the day sky, feeling like it is very special.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 12, 2022 at 8:00 PM

I always say good day to the moon when I catch her in the blue! Never tried imagism, I like this piece a lot! xomo

I Am Anaya

May 12, 2022 at 7:58 PM

I had to fave this one...It made me feel that sense of primordial gravitas When the pocketed moon stares at me and I stare back I say thank you for your beautiful sight! Have a good night!

Across the Miles

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