Across the Fields At Dawning

Darkness lifts with the hint of suns' light
across the fields at dawning.
The coming of day releases the night
as moving  some great awning.

The things that were hid now come to light
across the fields at dawning.
The suns' rays pierce the dark with their might
as alone, I write yawning.

Another world I look upon
across the fields at dawning.
What makes for tribulation is gone
across the fields at dawning.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 2:28 PM
Beautiful write Douglas, dawn is a great part of the day>James
Golden Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 3:11 PM
This is a beautiful illustration of God's love upon our lives: the Sun (or SON) as it pierces the darkness and warms the chill of evil...transforming our lives from ashes to beauty with His powerful grace! WONDERFUL! Donna
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May 7, 2009 at 2:34 PM
A very nice and inspiring poem. I love reading this kind of poems. Thanks for sharing this to us. Ernilando
Devonshire Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 7:46 PM
Amazing how our troubles, those that make "for tribulation," are gone when our attention is captured by the serenity of watching "the fields at dawning." So much peace in this great poem, Douglas!
Shahwan Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 8:36 AM
Beautiful poem.
Shango Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 7:54 AM
Bob Marley says "what was hidden fromthe wise and prudent ... now revealed to babes and suckling ..." what a powerful reminder. love.
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May 1, 2009 at 7:07 AM
I could read this over and over. Well done. .."fields at dawning" slips off the tongue in a wonderful way. BG
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