Across Melodic Skies

~ Echoes breath of northern fields where rhythms form as twilights dance Alone my love does play for you on mystic strings of found romance Neath weathered winds on sunset views of amethyst and crimson haze Fluorescent flows in shimmered light to harmonize these snowfall days For hear my love, eurhythmic tones symphonically our song takes flight Concertos played of purest sound across melodic skies this night ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 8:10 AM
A fine display of poetic words that beat the heart! Hugs...Kim
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December 10, 2019 at 8:13 AM
Thank you Kim for always being so nice to me. I appreciate you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
There Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 11:48 PM
Beautifully inspiring and tenderly romantic, a song with wings that easily carries me away with it ~ a fave.
Green Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Hope you enjoy your flight my friend as much as I enjoy your visits to my poetry. Your kindness always brings a smile to me. Thank you so very much HT.
Hamilton Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 9:42 PM
Pure solid gold Chris, loved every melodic word, and superb imagery. Good night!
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December 10, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thanks my friend. Your support and encouragement always is the fuel for my pen.
Na Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:46 PM
Nicely poured from your heart to the paper. Nice to see you back. Thanks for sharing this
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December 10, 2019 at 7:52 AM
Thanks so very much Greg for sharing your kind thoughts with me.
Wolf Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 7:11 PM
Melody and harmony so enchantingly combined here into a Rhapsody of Love! Bravo! Just gorgeous! Cheers, Gershon
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December 10, 2019 at 7:52 AM
Thank you my friend for your kind words. I love the word Rhapsody, I should have used it in this poem. :)
Adams Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 7:10 PM
sigh....and now i sit here listening to the rain drumming on the windowsill, trying to tune into the whispers of the wind, listening for the melody of your words... so beautiful this poem is Chris.... have a great night my friend... hugs
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December 10, 2019 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Sandy. Your nice words are like music to my ears and bring the sweetest melody to harmonize with the smile on my face.
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December 9, 2019 at 6:05 PM
This is a beautiful poem that I can hear like a song and brings such peace this rainy, winter night. Well written Chris. A Fav :)
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December 10, 2019 at 7:50 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. I am happy you could hear this one tonight. I appreciate you my friend.
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