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Across Melodic Skies

~ Echoes breath of northern fields where rhythms form as twilights dance Alone my love does play for you on mystic strings of found romance Neath weathered winds on sunset views of amethyst and crimson haze Fluorescent flows in shimmered light to harmonize these snowfall days For hear my love, eurhythmic tones symphonically our song takes flight Concertos played of purest sound across melodic skies this night ~

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/10/2019 8:10:00 AM

A fine display of poetic words that beat the heart! Hugs...Kim

Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2019 8:13:00 AM

Thank you Kim for always being so nice to me. I appreciate you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Hello There

Date: 12/9/2019 11:48:00 PM

Beautifully inspiring and tenderly romantic, a song with wings that easily carries me away with it ~ a fave.

Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2019 7:54:00 AM

Hope you enjoy your flight my friend as much as I enjoy your visits to my poetry. Your kindness always brings a smile to me. Thank you so very much HT.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/9/2019 9:42:00 PM

Pure solid gold Chris, loved every melodic word, and superb imagery. Good night!

Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2019 7:53:00 AM

Thanks my friend. Your support and encouragement always is the fuel for my pen.

Na Na

Date: 12/9/2019 8:46:00 PM

Nicely poured from your heart to the paper. Nice to see you back. Thanks for sharing this

Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2019 7:52:00 AM

Thanks so very much Greg for sharing your kind thoughts with me.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/9/2019 7:11:00 PM

Melody and harmony so enchantingly combined here into a Rhapsody of Love! Bravo! Just gorgeous! Cheers, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2019 7:52:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your kind words. I love the word Rhapsody, I should have used it in this poem. :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/9/2019 7:10:00 PM

sigh....and now i sit here listening to the rain drumming on the windowsill, trying to tune into the whispers of the wind, listening for the melody of your words... so beautiful this poem is Chris.... have a great night my friend... hugs

Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2019 7:51:00 AM

Thank you Sandy. Your nice words are like music to my ears and bring the sweetest melody to harmonize with the smile on my face.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/9/2019 6:05:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem that I can hear like a song and brings such peace this rainy, winter night. Well written Chris. A Fav :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2019 7:50:00 AM

Thank you so very much Heidi. I am happy you could hear this one tonight. I appreciate you my friend.