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'I think I know why the ocean flows' When I watch the tides send spume and surf onto the poets' swaying shore Caress the silken sand embrace high waters so quietly or with almighty roar As tangled seaweed massages my anxious sun burnt skin and longing wishes Gloom dissipates along with anxious fear that harbours tears of moody swishes Backwards and forwards and that is when 'I think I know why the ocean flows' Somehow simply because it can and to cleanse me kindly from my internal foes Pebbles along their journey sweep a message straight into my wounded heart Guided by the waning waxing moon's perpetuity for my compass and star chart Reflect a canopy of clouds and drifting images as they speak in silent mumble And lift me up when the sand castle I built proceeds to disappear and crumble When the donjon of my fortress beyond all reason makes way for pure emotion I don't need know why waters flow and what the purpose is of such commotion May time will send me a message in a bottle from a far away and kindred soul Crafted with joyful purpose and encouragement and scripted on a fading scroll Remind me of lonely ebbs and waterfalls cascading onto sorrowed sediments Smoothen over lost direction missed opportunities ambitions and impediments One rainy day I found a life line anchor and bronze bell from a full rigged vessel And know the storm didn't have cognizance or conscience with which to wrestle I do not even claim to know whether the salty foam itself needs to comprehend Its graces and what spirited strength and without any fail or sputter it commends Sometimes it's better to simply and humbly accept the growth and innate power Live in the moment the here rather than to wait in vain for an all so perfect hour I have no doubt that oceans flow and that they do not ask to be understood Their waves nevertheless send me dreams hope and finely sculpted drifing wood My beach hut doesn't have to be a marble mansion a small abode is way enough When I'm fortunate will give me shelter from what feeds my ocean from above I think I do not know why oceans flow and never rest to give me instant pleasure I listen to the wind resonate in a sea shell and relish in that miracle and treasure Thunder and enlightening storms flush over all which I know that I never seize Never have never will and all that matters is what rocks in transcendental breeze 'I do not think I know why the ocean flows' 15th April 2020 The line and trigger for this poem 'I think I know why the ocean flows' is taken from the poem of the same name by Vijah Pandit

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Date: 5/3/2020 8:18:00 PM
Great thoughts! Like: Reflect a canopy of clouds and drifting images as they speak in silent mumble/And lift me up when the sand castle I built proceeds to disappear and crumble. Congratulations on first place, Kai!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/6/2020 3:01:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 5/3/2020 7:53:00 PM
I love the longer stanzas, much like long rolling waves that envelope us. You truly have a grasp on the OCEAN! Hope you are well and happy.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/6/2020 3:04:00 AM
Thank you Lonna. Unfortunately the beaches here in Spain are still closed, but the inner momentum is building up. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 5/3/2020 10:58:00 AM
Kia, love your poem, great flow and imagery. Congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/6/2020 3:06:00 AM
Thank you Eve. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 5/3/2020 5:55:00 AM
I think you outdid yourself here... An amazing write, with so many great lines.. A poem with great use of metaphor, especially the first stanza, love the seaweed reference.. I think the ocean flows, because its all it knows.... Touches of angst and sadness... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/6/2020 3:08:00 AM
Hi Silent One. A great compliment, particularly coming from you. Thank you for sponsoring the contest, Kai
Date: 4/23/2020 12:31:00 PM
Beautifully done. A fave for me.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/6/2020 2:53:00 AM
Thank you Caren. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 4/22/2020 9:53:00 AM
Another brilliant jewel to favourite. I will have to read Vijah Pandit...this holds resonance within me, "I do not even claim to know whether the salty foam itself needs to comprehend Its graces and what spirited strength and without any fail or sputter it commends Sometimes it's better to simply and humbly accept the growth and innate power Live in the moment the here rather than to wait in vain for an all so perfect hour..."
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/24/2020 6:47:00 AM
Surely the quest for knowledge is important, but often we try far to hard. Take care, Kai

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