Acquiescence

'I think I know why the ocean flows'


When I watch the tides send spume and surf onto the poets' swaying shore

Caress the silken sand embrace high waters so quietly or with almighty roar

As tangled seaweed massages my anxious sun burnt skin and longing wishes

Gloom dissipates along with anxious fear that harbours tears of moody swishes


Backwards and forwards and that is when 'I think I know why the ocean flows'

Somehow simply because it can and to cleanse me kindly from my internal foes


Pebbles along their journey sweep a message straight into my wounded heart

Guided by the waning waxing moon's perpetuity for my compass and star chart

Reflect a canopy of clouds and drifting images as they speak in silent mumble

And lift me up when the sand castle I built proceeds to disappear and crumble


When the donjon of my fortress beyond all reason makes way for pure emotion

I don't need know why waters flow and what the purpose is of  such commotion 


May time will send me a message in a bottle from a far away and kindred soul

Crafted with joyful purpose and encouragement and scripted on a fading scroll

Remind me of lonely ebbs and waterfalls cascading onto sorrowed sediments

Smoothen over lost direction missed opportunities ambitions and impediments


One rainy day I found a life line anchor and bronze bell from a full rigged vessel

And know the storm didn't have cognizance or conscience with which to wrestle


I do not even claim to know whether the salty foam itself needs to comprehend

Its graces and what spirited strength and without any fail or sputter it commends

Sometimes it's better to simply and humbly accept the growth and innate power

Live in the moment the here rather than to wait in vain for an all so perfect hour


I have no doubt that oceans flow and that they do not ask to be understood

Their waves nevertheless send me dreams hope and finely sculpted drifing wood


My beach hut doesn't have to be a marble mansion a small abode is way enough

When I'm fortunate will give me shelter from what feeds my ocean from above

I think I do not know why oceans flow and never rest to give me instant pleasure

I listen to the wind resonate in a sea shell and relish in that miracle and treasure


Thunder and enlightening storms flush over all which I know that I never seize

Never have never will and all that matters is what rocks in transcendental breeze


                                                       'I do not think I know why the ocean flows'


15th April 2020


The line and trigger for this poem   'I think I know why the ocean flows' 

is taken from the poem of the same name by Vijah Pandit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 5/3/2020 8:18:00 PM
Great thoughts! Like: Reflect a canopy of clouds and drifting images as they speak in silent mumble/And lift me up when the sand castle I built proceeds to disappear and crumble. Congratulations on first place, Kai!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/6/2020 3:01:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 5/3/2020 7:53:00 PM
I love the longer stanzas, much like long rolling waves that envelope us. You truly have a grasp on the OCEAN! Hope you are well and happy.
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Date: 5/6/2020 3:04:00 AM
Thank you Lonna. Unfortunately the beaches here in Spain are still closed, but the inner momentum is building up. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 5/3/2020 10:58:00 AM
Kia, love your poem, great flow and imagery. Congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 5/6/2020 3:06:00 AM
Thank you Eve. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 5/3/2020 5:55:00 AM
I think you outdid yourself here... An amazing write, with so many great lines.. A poem with great use of metaphor, especially the first stanza, love the seaweed reference.. I think the ocean flows, because its all it knows.... Touches of angst and sadness... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 5/6/2020 3:08:00 AM
Hi Silent One. A great compliment, particularly coming from you. Thank you for sponsoring the contest, Kai
Date: 4/23/2020 12:31:00 PM
Beautifully done. A fave for me.
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Date: 5/6/2020 2:53:00 AM
Thank you Caren. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 4/22/2020 9:53:00 AM
Another brilliant jewel to favourite. I will have to read Vijah Pandit...this holds resonance within me, "I do not even claim to know whether the salty foam itself needs to comprehend Its graces and what spirited strength and without any fail or sputter it commends Sometimes it's better to simply and humbly accept the growth and innate power Live in the moment the here rather than to wait in vain for an all so perfect hour..."
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/24/2020 6:47:00 AM
Surely the quest for knowledge is important, but often we try far to hard. Take care, Kai
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