Acoustics

the wind resounding...
wild flowers in the meadow
responsively dance

Entered Brian Strand's 
New hiku footle tanka contest
5/11/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 2:04 PM
Great imagery in this one, Harry. I can see the dancing flowers! Have a great week my friend. Bill
Fowler Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 7:08 AM
Yes, dancing wildflowers. I dance with them! Congratulations your win Harry! :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 11:16 AM
so glad to see this on the HM at least. I guess this is one I never saw yet, and I really like it.
Kendrick Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 1:54 PM
Good one that you have penned in this one. Congratulations on being recognized in Brian's contest. Sara
Romios Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 11:30 AM
Great, Harry,,hope you are a winner in the contest! Pangie
Hankins Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 8:30 AM
Very nice, harry. I have observed this in my meadow, too. BOL in the contest.
Poet Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Your poetry is replete with a certain tone and beauty. Well articulated, Harry, conveying a beautiful picture of the flowers and meadows.
Pandit Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 5:05 AM
I hear the sound and see the dance. Well done, harry.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 2:36 AM
Astounding haiku. Superb imagery.
Cunningham Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 2:15 AM
A stunning image, can just see them swaying in the breeze. Tom
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