Acoustic of Poetry

P rose unfolds revealing the deepest inner desires
O nly a few words transcend into a multitude of  meaning.
E ven after he explains something is lost in translation,
T he simplest things made beautiful by the words, they
R eminding us we’re not alone, increase
Y earning to become one with the experience
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Williams Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 11:19 AM
Wayland I like the enjambment in this , very good...David
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January 31, 2013 at 4:35 PM
Thank you very much for your comments.
Roberts Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 1:50 AM
Well done, you did your homework well....Seren
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January 31, 2013 at 2:08 AM
thank you so much for you lovely comment. the lines are supposed to continue, right? I mean the last word of one line flows to the next, right? I saw some where they used punctuation and that seemed to be the case. Thanks again for your comment.
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January 30, 2013 at 9:01 PM
I see you are trying out a few forms on the soup... I'm impressed... but if you truly want to wow me... I would like to see you try a slam... or an epic alliteration. Wayland, you are awesome... and i'm kidding about the impress me part. I love your poetry already. "-) pd
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January 31, 2013 at 12:51 AM
Thanks so much Linda, and I will try them. I had said something about the epic alliteration, but like I said I was confusing forms lol. Thanks always for such wonderful comments.
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