John Lawless Poet Free verse

Acid Rain - For Contest

Acid Rain


How quickly the soothing sound of raindrops
turned to bitter trickles dripping from the
black umbrella onto our hearts.



John G. Lawless
8/26/2015


submitted to – Rain and Dark, Isolated Places – Poetry Contest

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The Grahamburglar August 26, 2015 at 11:25 PM Whoa...wait, what? How did you...that was just...wait, what!? I don't know what trickery this is, but I REALLY like it. This is off to my fave list.

Barbara Gorelick August 26, 2015 at 9:25 PM This is terrific. I am a fan of saying big things in few words..I expect this to do wel in the contest. BG