Aching Joints (Senryu)
Tiger Balm compound
Is really my new best friend
Relieves aching joints
© Joseph, 9/12/07
© All Rights Reserved
The traditional or classic Japanese senryu format has three lines: the first has
five syllables, second has seven syllables and the third five syllables. The
pattern is 5/7/5 for a total of seventeen syllables. The senryu is generally about
an emotional expression.
Copyright © Joseph Spence Sr | Year Posted 2007
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