Cynthia Vipond Poet Rhyme

Aching Heart

Indigestion
Is the question
Brain illusion
Or misdirection 

Doctor's pill 
This sickly ill 
Cannot repair
To fit the bill

Just time to heal
Oh, heartache feel
Is all to quell
My ache and reel

Restlessness
Just to confess
Invades my very
Consciousness

A hope that sticks 
Physician's tricks
The long-shot risk
Of one more fix

Like fracture weld
Or soulful meld
Simple solution..
Just to be held

CV
31.10.23

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Hilda Greenhough October 31, 2023 at 8:23 AM Poem reads strong, fast and to the point. The last paragraph is apt. Cynthia Vipond October 31, 2023 at 9:37 AM Thank you Hilda. Cindy x

Daisy Meadows October 31, 2023 at 1:51 AM A good poem. Well done. Cynthia Vipond October 31, 2023 at 2:06 AM Jeanette - thank you too dear. Cindy x

Karen Jones October 31, 2023 at 12:38 AM I like the rhythm and rhyme of this. I agree hugs are great! Hugs love and light. Cynthia Vipond October 31, 2023 at 2:05 AM Thank you Karen my dear, yes all for a hug. Best Cindy x