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Written 16th August, 2026 for Lento Soup Poetry Contest sponsored by Charles Messina

Aching Ash - CM

Grieves the dirt beneath the leaves,
Leaves of smoke the forest grieves.
Dark the ash on iron bark,
Bark the shadows in the dark.

Bone, whispers the wind against the stone,
Stone the earth that strips the bone.
Deep the branches sink to sleep,
Sleep the silence buried deep.
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Hind Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 6:06 PM
very lonesome feeling, but it's a beautiful Lento
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 6:47 PM
Thanks Paige. I am learning new forms with each contest.
bard Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 5:04 PM
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 6:47 PM
Douglas, there have been so many here and now overseas too.🔥
bard Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 5:05 PM
good day Alison Great poem Ash Wednesday fires? Blessings Douglas🎉
Goldsmith Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 12:26 PM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write you have here. Love This One...Great Picture.. Great Ending... I have Never done this Lento style. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/week writing away................
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 2:27 PM
This is my first ever Lento. Thank you for visiting.❤️
Poet Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 10:42 AM
Wonderful Lento poem, Alison, with deep metaphors and impactful wording.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 2:26 PM
Thank you Sotto
Volumes Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 7:59 AM
Just love the way you swap the rhymes to make such an eerie picture of a grieving forest. I imagine it in dark shades of green and brown and black. Earthy tones with wispy wind enticing the leaves and branches. This is a terrific Lento Alison.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 2:25 PM
Thank you so much.❤️
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