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For Bite Size Contest 124 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

Achilles Heels

I strolled my garden on a day so fair, 
and lo, a sad spider was sitting there.   
I found that I could commiserate 
with the little guy whose legs were eight.
Imagine, my friend, how it feels  
to have so many Achilles heels.
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