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Ache of Strings and Bow

A wail escapes from its bow Each note rising, ebbing To cut into my pinch of ache; While strings quiver on flesh, A wail escapes from its bow. From Gabby Sabre [ Aug 3 2015] A Prized Refrain Contest [nette onclaud] - My godfather gave me his violin for my music lessons in high school. Since then, I got hooked on this instrument; a valuable possession. No.1--VIOLIN

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Date: 11/16/2015 5:01:00 PM
The violin can be so beautiful! This is a nice piece of work! Peace Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/18/2015 1:00:00 PM
- I'm a little late, but better late than never :) - Congratulations your 2nd place in the contest, Gabby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/17/2015 9:46:00 PM
Gabby, congrats on your win with this beautiful write! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:13:00 PM
Gabby, congrats on your wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 8/17/2015 8:13:00 AM
Wow an amazing write Gabby! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/16/2015 7:58:00 PM
wow, this is GOOD work!! Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 8/16/2015 3:37:00 PM
Beautiful memories of a treasured item - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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