Ache

Given time, an ache will go to sleep But from time to time may creep In course of time, will yield But with a slight scratch, may bleed

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2023 11:17:00 AM

Yes, an ache in the heart even though it seems to be healed can bleed again. I am glad that I chose to read this one today. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/2/2021 8:49:00 PM

"with a slight scratch" - yes this is all it takes.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/28/2021 10:08:00 AM

As one grows old, It is difficult to get rid of the pain. ~~

Valsa George
Date: 11/29/2021 9:02:00 PM

With age, ailments grows... and pain entails ! Thanks a lot Victor !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/28/2021 5:01:00 AM

Soothe the pain don't scratch--time does heal!

Valsa George
Date: 11/29/2021 9:01:00 PM

Yes, shall be very careful not to scratch, lol ! Thanks a lot !