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Accident That Spelt Ruin

I saw the woman sprawled on the ground, her legs askew beneath her. She was alive but could not move, obviously in a faint. Right in front of her a small pram squeezed to a wall pinned by a truck that had hurtled down the hill hitting mother and child. No sound came from the pram. The driver knelt down. He cried, oh how he cried. Did he cry for the child he had killed? For the mother who lost her treasure? Or for the license, he was going to lose? Only he could tell. A family ruined. No one thought of the husband who lost his child who found his wife injured, all because of a reckless driver who was late for work, drove fast, painted a wall with an innocent child's blood. Did he have a late-night call? A drinking binge? A lass to love? Whatever it was a child's life was lost, a family ruined. Nothing could turn the clock back. The ambulance arrived. So did the upholder of the law. Nothing to do. We move forward. It is our destiny. A true story but it did not involve me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/27/2023 1:06:00 PM
Just dropping by to say hi . I do not see any new poems from you yet this week. HOpe you are feeling well, Victor.
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Date: 6/26/2023 9:07:00 AM
Heartfelt verse, it happens so often. Blessings my friend
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Date: 6/25/2023 12:35:00 PM
Very sad piece for this child's passing. Our lives are so full of places to go and things to do that we don't always take the care that we need to, in order for safety's sake. You pen a lot of good points in this piece, very thought-provoking.
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Date: 6/25/2023 12:19:00 PM
- I know a similar story, Victor - Terrible - A poem that gives sad thoughts - hugs
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Date: 6/25/2023 7:56:00 AM
It is so sad when God has to take in innocent victims, it must break His heart as well as ours. thanks for sharing this sad story, I felt every word :) hrm
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Date: 6/25/2023 6:07:00 AM
Victor! Yes, this true story makes us all cry,but goes on in truth, taking a horrible yearly toll. Thank you for writing and sharing this, hugs for U! sally
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Date: 6/24/2023 9:03:00 PM
We witness such accidents on a daily basis. The recklessness of one can ruin many lives. You have narrated the story in such a way that we have literally passed through the trauma of the situation.
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Date: 6/24/2023 4:08:00 PM
A few years in prison. Loss of license permant probation. This piece ask for judgment.
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Date: 6/24/2023 2:04:00 PM
Your storytelling is truly exceptional, Victor. The portrayal of a tragic account of mortality is truly heart-wrenching.
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Date: 6/24/2023 12:25:00 PM
Such drama and sadness. Amd loss, well Depicted by a gifted poer! Panagioita
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Date: 6/24/2023 11:44:00 AM
The multifaceted approach taken here Victor works very well, as you attempt to understand what all parties both directly and indirectly involved are feeling, unfortunately an all too common yet avoidable occurrence, unflinchingly penned, cheers David
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Date: 6/24/2023 11:08:00 AM
Life is harsh Victor, but when an innocent baby in a pram is killed on has to wonder why. Both mother and chiled so blame less and a dad who will soon discover this devastating News. blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/24/2023 10:15:00 AM
A poignant tale of loss, Victor. Great writing.
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Date: 6/24/2023 8:42:00 AM
I love how you told this story. Excellent, Victor.
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Date: 6/24/2023 5:53:00 AM
A leading cause of death. Heartbreaking story, Victor.
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Date: 6/24/2023 5:46:00 AM
Oh, that is so very tragic, and many levels.
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Date: 6/24/2023 1:59:00 AM
What a sad thing to happen to that mother and child Victor, it’s horrifying how life can change in an instant. Well written… Belle
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