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Accepting Life

As God breathed life into us, so must we accept his gift! Breathe in the life he gave you for yourself - and do it not halfheartedly. Inhale deeply every little thing. Swallow your experiences too as if they were tasty morsels of food. You can gulp them down with excitement or savor them slowly. Even unpleasant things must be taken in, for every drop you breathe in and swallow becomes a part of you and molds you into the being you are - more human and closer to your maker. Aug. 18, 2021 for Unseeking Seeker's As We Be Breathed Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/22/2021 2:20:00 PM
This is a delightful free verse poem. The message is right on. I really liked your admonishment to breathe in the bad things, because the purpose of life is not to be happy, but to care, thru all kinds of experiences. Another winner from you. Later alligator, Bryan
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/22/2021 2:51:00 PM
not a soup winner. Golden neither, but glad you liked both poems!
Date: 8/20/2021 11:56:00 AM
You totally uplifted me with this poem Andrea, I am utterly exhausted with work and our move to the home we have finally chosen and bought - packing, working, little sleeping is taking its toll - I need to chill out - this poem made me think! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/19/2021 2:42:00 PM
Beautifully penned piece of poetry.
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Date: 8/19/2021 10:18:00 AM
So true Ria...we must learn to breathe in wholeheartedly all that God has given us... every little thing,...every little experience is a blessing to us.. bringing us more closer to the maker... words of wisdom.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 8/19/2021 1:37:00 AM
This is a marvel of a poem. Emotions abound, so does good advice. Hugs.
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Date: 8/18/2021 11:52:00 PM
That is a beautiful advice... Lovely take on the contest...
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Date: 8/18/2021 11:51:00 PM
This poem gives a sense of, the forever chased item.......peace
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Date: 8/18/2021 7:41:00 PM
I like how you explored life in this poem, the good and the bad....Delice
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Date: 8/18/2021 6:43:00 PM
brilliant write with words of wisdom throughout your poem... love this Andrea :) hugs
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Date: 8/18/2021 2:33:00 PM
I agree with the essence of your thoughts, Andrea. Life is a blend of the happy and sad. All the best.
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Date: 8/18/2021 1:17:00 PM
Oh, Andrea, I so love this and hope it is a top winner. I love it and will definitely be faving it. God bless you always, sweet friend. Love, Gina
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