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Everytime you lead I follow and its as if you've led me to a blizzard and I am ment to lose myself in it...and you just walk away and some how.. some way i still love you... and you mock my attempt to survive by leading SOMEONE else to the most beautiful field of sunflowers and daisies, and its as if the hail and rain beat me harder and harder and i love you deeper and deeper And once i survive the blizzard you act as if it never occured and we greet again and it feels like we are starting over i ACCEPT it and we start agian and i follow you once more no futher than to a raptures storm which i attempt to survive but my heart is paralyzed and my pride wounded... EVERYTIME you lead i follow but this time i accept WHOLE HEARTEDLY that we are to be NOTHING more than friends...to every hello and EVERY goodbye.... and YOU are FORGIVEN my once loved FRIEND....

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Date: 12/27/2010 9:41:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Raneisha. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2010 9:08:00 AM
I like that
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Date: 12/25/2010 10:14:00 PM
It seems that it needs work. I feel the emotion and tension in it, but it needs to be presented better. Keep it up!
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