Acceptance

Its safe here
He's pushed everyone as far away as he can.
Now a solitary man with a stagnant plan
He forces himself to give a smile away
Though his thoughts are miles away
He gives a courteous nod
 And acknowledges the rest of life in the universe.
But he would rather disperse of the nicities.
Live alone in simplicity
He wonders to himself
Where am I?
Where am I going?
Is my lunacy showing?
And in the midst of the glowing harvest moon
He begs the hollow sky above
To come and rescue him soon.
He lays back on the pillow
 that has conformed to his lonely image.
He dreams again of an icy tomb
Locked away like in the hush of a mothers womb
He finds comfort in the lonliness
And has warmed up to its shallow caress
Yes acceptance of his empty life no less
And another tick on the clock is put to rest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:15 PM
gut-wrenching language which expresses a sense of finality, carl.. this is an amazing piece..huggs
A   Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:04 PM
Hi Carl, I'm waiting for a new post from you...hehehe... now, that i have all the time today... :)
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October 3, 2016 at 12:22 PM
That's the hardest part of my day, accepting and continuing. Carl, a great read for sure. My favorite line is like in the hush of a mothers ........ A very good write, I can connect with. Linda
Fraser Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 12:33 PM
My Dear Friend. I was hoping you could read between the lines. And you have. Thank you so much for taking time to read. I always am gratefull for your input. Thanks so much. Big hug and blessings always. Carl
Smith Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Terrific write Carl. The essence of depression...great lines
Fraser Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Thanks Tim, its just about accepting the state one is trapped in. Appreciate you stopping by. Carl
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Carl nice poetry I find there is a story in this poem.It is different and I like that. You did great! Keep on writing.
Fraser Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Hi Darlene, Yes this is a story of someone. I appreciate you taking time to read it. Thanks so much. Carl
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