acceptance

although
our love died
my hopes will linger 
stubborn and destined to fail
until the sands of time blast her from my mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 8:16 PM
Wow. Are you pining for the ex here? This is so emotive, Jack. Congrats
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Very nice winner. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K
Miller Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 3:14 AM
I love this poem, very well written, congratulations
Faulkner Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 9:07 AM
It is so painful to lose love, I like your line 'stubborn and destined to fail' - very descriptive~
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July 13, 2024 at 6:24 AM
I like this Jack especially the powerful last line!! Debx
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