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acceptance

although our love died my hopes will linger stubborn and destined to fail until the sands of time blast her from my mind

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Date: 7/25/2024 8:16:00 PM
Wow. Are you pining for the ex here? This is so emotive, Jack. Congrats
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Date: 7/25/2024 6:12:00 AM
Very nice winner. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K
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Date: 7/25/2024 3:14:00 AM
I love this poem, very well written, congratulations
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Date: 7/13/2024 9:07:00 AM
It is so painful to lose love, I like your line 'stubborn and destined to fail' - very descriptive~
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Date: 7/13/2024 6:24:00 AM
I like this Jack especially the powerful last line!! Debx
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