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Accept My Hugs

How could I sense when people are in need of hugs?  I always had that loving heart Now what happened to it?  I'm in big trouble...ragged with loathe  My hugs don't hold the same feelings It chokes the living from their shelter It makes them weak...I slowly swelter  If I offered you a hug,  Will you accept it Or leave me hanging there?  How could I sense when people are in need of hugs?  I always have had that loving heart Now what happened to the love that shields us all? How did this horrid situation tear us all apart?  My hugs hold no importance...lacking desire It only feeds the fire Not the helpless in heart  It clusters annoyance in the soul  If I offered you a hug,  Will you accept it?  or leave me hanging there?  Now I'm lustered in wrath... I fear that dad will lose you  Just over a single hug given by him... Your affectionate embraces feel so grim  Restrain from losing yourself Accept his hugs that hold such guiltless charity Free from faithless arguments...don't hold on to worthless words If he offered you a hug,  Will you accept it Or leave him hanging there in the freezing cold? His hugs aren't sold Like a piece of perishable gold To an ignorant form just like you It holds freedom...it's all true  If he offered you a hug,  Accept them and appreciate his offer Because he doesn't dwell on the negativity Feel free to say your last goodbyes But, remember us as our family departs...and dies If He offered you a hug,  Will you accept it Or leave Him hanging there in the freezing cold Without His healing arms Cradling you and your family throughout the furious night?  If he offered you a hug,  Will you accept it Or leave him hanging there?  It wouldn't be a dissappointment If you would willingly Accept his hugs We would be drowning with excitement If you would certainly Accept OUR hugs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/29/2013 7:51:00 PM
Words of deep and powerful emotion. Lots of feeling and soul is in each line. Takes the reader on a journey into your heart. good job
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 10/1/2013 10:23:00 PM
Thank you...I wrote this a couple of years ago...funny how time flies. :) Thanks for the encouragement. Still writing songs and poetry.

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