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sparkling rapids rush
in mad haste through green forests
lemon clouds float by

laughing children race
bluebirds fly over the hills
red sun turns around

colored balloons rise
amid dancing in the streets
breezes on the blooms

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Date: 12/23/2020 9:01:00 AM
WoW! Evelyn, What a lovely and festive scene. I enjoyed the lively and heartwarming tone of your piece. PS, Dancing in the street by Martha and the Vandellas went well, with your beautiful haikus. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/23/2020 10:05:00 AM
Hi Alexis, I love to bring joy by keeping my poetry upbeat and cheerful. Thank you for making me feel as though I am succeeding. A Merry Christmas to you and yours, Evelyn :=)
Date: 12/23/2020 6:33:00 AM
How I wish we could have a Christmas like this. My greetings to you. ~~
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Date: 12/23/2020 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. I absolutely loved your poem about dancing around the Christmas tree. I hope your Christmas is blessed. :)
Date: 12/22/2020 8:32:00 PM
Love all the sparkling, radiant imagery, Evelyn. Season's Joy, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/22/2020 10:20:00 PM
As always, your comment is fun and uplifting, Gershon. Thank you. A blessed holiday season to you and yours, Evelyn :=)
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