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sparkling rapids rush in mad haste through green forests lemon clouds float by laughing children race bluebirds fly over the hills red sun turns around colored balloons rise amid dancing in the streets breezes on the blooms

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/23/2020 9:01:00 AM

WoW! Evelyn, What a lovely and festive scene. I enjoyed the lively and heartwarming tone of your piece. PS, Dancing in the street by Martha and the Vandellas went well, with your beautiful haikus. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/23/2020 10:05:00 AM

Hi Alexis, I love to bring joy by keeping my poetry upbeat and cheerful. Thank you for making me feel as though I am succeeding. A Merry Christmas to you and yours, Evelyn :=)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/23/2020 6:33:00 AM

How I wish we could have a Christmas like this. My greetings to you. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/23/2020 8:48:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. I absolutely loved your poem about dancing around the Christmas tree. I hope your Christmas is blessed. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/22/2020 8:32:00 PM

Love all the sparkling, radiant imagery, Evelyn. Season's Joy, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/22/2020 10:20:00 PM

As always, your comment is fun and uplifting, Gershon. Thank you. A blessed holiday season to you and yours, Evelyn :=)