Abyss of Nature

in the deep abyss- of nature I find great peace- wild flowers swaying
fluttering leaves sing- a blue stream bubbling along . . lost in tangled ferns


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December 30, 2019


Poetry/haiku/abyss of nature
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1212-747-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written in Pseudonym.

Written for the Ku Duet
sponsor, Silent One

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 7:04 PM
Lovely, Constance. Congrats on your top win.
La France Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 7:42 PM
Line, thanks for the lovely and the congrats !
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:35 AM
Beautiful Constance and deserving of your first placement. Congratulations! xxoo
La France Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 10:11 PM
Connie, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations !
Callus Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 8:34 AM
Beautiful imagery, untouched by human hands, Constance. Congratulations on your top placement! Regards // paul
La France Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Pauls, thanks for the congratulations and for the compliment !
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:59 PM
Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations !
Ligon Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 8:56 PM
As a fellow nature lover I love this image and the emotion the entanglement conveys. Congrats!
La France Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:23 AM
Juliet, thanks for the congrats, I have always loved nature since a little child holding my fathers hand ~
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:42 PM
LOVELY, dear heart and congrats for a well deserved win
La France Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:23 AM
Andrea, thanks for the congrats and the lovely !
Hawkens Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 3:30 PM
Back again. I just wanted to congratulate you on a fine win. I just want to say I love this Poem. JC
La France Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:24 AM
JC, thank you so much for the congrats and the love !
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 1:26 PM
- A wonderful ku duet, D.H. :) - Congratulations on a 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:24 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment !
Adams Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:12 AM
your create a wonderful scene... congrats on your top win :) hugs
La France Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 12:19 PM
Sandra, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats !
Y. Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Hi BW, This is a good nature write. Congrats on your first place win. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 12:19 PM
Alexis, thanks for the compliment and the congrats !
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Beautiful writing, congrats Constance on your top win!
La France Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 8:54 AM
John thanks for the beautiful and the congrats !
Somadas Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Nice imagery.. Great win..
La France Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 8:54 AM
Jenish, thanks for the compliment !
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 7:01 AM
Oh yes! Most deserving! Congrats, Constance!
La France Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 8:53 AM
Kim, thanks for the congrats and compliment !
One Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 6:43 AM
very deep... a sense of being lost in nature.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
La France Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 8:53 AM
Silent, thanks for another great contest and for my awesome placement !
Hawkens Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 9:49 AM
A beautifully written poem. I love the way you used the imagery in this poem. Thank you, for a wonderful write. JC
La France Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 10:47 AM
JC, thanks for visiting my poetry and for the compliment !
Neumann Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 5:13 AM
Beautiful ...
La France Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 10:47 AM
Kai, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:07 PM
Lovely and love how you ended this!
La France Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:43 PM
Kim thanks for visiting with the lovely !
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