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Abyss of Addiction

"Abyss of Addiction" is a poem by Max Burchett that delves into the harrowing world of substance abuse and its devastating consequences. It paints the grim picture of our society where poisons masquerade as solace, enticing individuals into a treacherous path of self-destruction. This poem explores the deceptive allure of drugs, which promise fleeting moments of escape but ultimately exact a heavy toll of suffering and death.

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by Maxwell "Max" Sebastian Burchett
In every street and town, Poisons abound, Tricking the mind, Destroying the brain. Some seek it out For cheaper effect, But have to pay with their bodies, And pay with their lives. Unwittingly lured By a false sense of escape Becoming victims To an insidious grip. Drugs, nothing new, in times past In shadows it thrived, the silent foe Unseen, ever present in varied forms Still claiming lives, shattering dreams. Still the silent whisper beckons, Drug allure persists, a Siren’s song, Promising solace, momentary bliss, But the price of escape, greater suffering and death. Generation to generation, the cycle repeats, Drugs evolve, taking on different disguises, Still offering refuge from life’s defeats, But devastation and darkness, all the same. Victims seeking a way to battle their demons, The drug becomes a demon itself. Then finally, the addicts' only friend, Their deadly companion to life’s end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/29/2024 9:47:00 PM
This piece possesses a haunting beauty that touches the soul. It delves into the heart of addiction, exploring its profound significance. The final stanza is especially poignant. The demon, a relentless force, continues to thrive. That demon took my sister. Thank you for sharing this. Xo Jessica
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Date: 11/8/2023 11:40:00 AM
THIS POEM SYMBOLISES THE THREAT TO SOCIETY AND ITS PEOPLE. NO ONE IS IMMUNE. I WROTE A POEM CALLED DESIRE AND MOST PEOPLE DO NOT KNOW THAT IT IS ABOUT DRUGS. ALL YOUR POEMS TELL A STORY.
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Date: 10/17/2023 12:53:00 AM
I have seen to much of what addiction can do to those around the addict, the collateral damage. Thank you for your words.
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Date: 9/3/2023 3:29:00 PM
Welcome. A chilling poem about the devastating impact drugs cripple our society. I wonder why America is number one in opioid addiction. Getting to know our demons is a start. Thank you.
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Max Burchett
Date: 9/3/2023 6:36:00 PM
Hi Trina, Thank you for your comments. I appreciate those! And that is a good question; why is America number one in opioid addiction? I could make some guesses, but I don't really know the answer to that. Best to you there, Max
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Date: 9/3/2023 6:31:00 PM
Hi Trina, Thank you for your comments. I appreciate those! And that is a good question; why is America number one in opioid addiction? I could make some guesses, but I don't really know the answer to that. Best to you there, Max
Date: 8/31/2023 1:38:00 PM
Max, great write on this subject. So much lives taken too soon because of it.
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Date: 9/3/2023 6:38:00 PM
Thanks, Akkina! Yes, too many gone too soon from this. Best, Max
Date: 8/25/2023 1:25:00 PM
Yes, max so true. How many lives snuffed out? How many millions addicted to various and sundry substances. Great narration. Who was it? If you get time check out my piece - Ludicrous lucidity. Similar theme
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Date: 8/28/2023 8:48:00 PM
Hi Tom, thanks for your comments! The drug problem seems to be getting worse. And fentanyl has added a new risk of death. A very sad situation for those caught up in it. Best, Max
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Max Burchett
Date: 8/28/2023 8:44:00 PM
Hi Tom, thanks for your comments! The drug problem seems to be getting worse. And fentanyl has added a new risk of death. A very sad situation for those caught up in it. Best, Max
Date: 8/24/2023 2:41:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wisdom-filled thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Max Burchett
Date: 11/2/2023 9:23:00 AM
Good Morning Beata, And thank you for your kind comments!! Yes, John 3:16. Best to you there, Max

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