Abysmal Sorrow

You are my idol, epitome of my life.
I treasure thy memories,buried deep in my heart.

I cherish that warmth as a toddler,
When on your chest I slept .
I miss your fingers caressing my hair, as I wept.

I admire that hug as I excelled in exams,
I miss your temper as I annoyed you with my pals.

I adore those moments when we shared ideas on 
humanity, education, nation and politics,
I miss those times when we celebrated 
days and events.

I felt dejected as u relinquish life,
Tears go dry in abysmal sorrow,

Now as I recapture in retrospection,
I have nothing but to embrace your memories............

You are my sole inspiration,
I miss you deeply, dad !!!!







Written on
In loving memory of my father, 
and dedicated to him


Now for contest- Father's Day
Sponsor - Carol Eastman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 11, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Dr Umpa, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:14 PM
same here, dr. upma.. congrats on your greeat win; very touching!.. huggs
Callus Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Very touching Upma! A lovely dedication to your Dad who will always live in your memory and in your heart. Congratulations! // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:39 PM
Thanks Paul ! It's ten years now n not a single day without his thoughts ,, he's in my heart n more so in my soul ! Thanks for lovely words // Upma //
Villarosa Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 6:02 AM
Well written poem to feel gratitude for the presence of a loving father. Congratulations on winning, Dr. Upma
A. Sharma Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:40 PM
Thanks Noël for lovely comments !
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:12 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, Dr.Upma
A. Sharma Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Thanks Dr Ram !
Lindley Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:58 PM
A winning tribute so lovingly written my friend. Congrats on your win!!!!!
A. Sharma Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:42 PM
Thanks Robert for ur always beautiful comments !
Johnson Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:21 PM
alovely tribute. congratulations. Love, Joyce
A. Sharma Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:43 PM
Thanks Joyce ,, appreciate ur visit n lovely comments !
A  Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 1:45 AM
Dr Upma, a nice lovely winning poem. *SKAT*
Johnson Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 5:24 PM
You were so lucky to have him and memories will soften your sorrow. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 12:45 PM
dr. upma, your emotive piece warmed my heart... sweet congrats!.. huggs
Mehta Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 4:59 AM
Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, Dr. Upma
Gasun Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 2:44 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Dr. Upma . Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora
Posey Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 11:30 AM
You have penned a great tribute to one who loved you and planted many memories to comfort you in his absence. Congrats on a well earned win.....Jake
Konos Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 6:27 AM
Lovely and touching, M E M O R I E S
A  Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 10:03 PM
DR. . Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.
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