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Absorbed

Robins and sparrows and chickadees,
A hummingbird or two.
Their bird song puts my soul at ease
Dispelling mood of blue
As I listen and absorb the view.





25/06/2012

animalshappinessnaturequintain (english)

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David O'Haolin Whalen

July 4, 2012 at 3:27 PM

Francine, I love poets who do justice to Nature, and you certainly do just that. It"s obviously you're a Nature lover. (like me!)

Robert Pettit

July 2, 2012 at 11:39 PM

Anybody who admires birds will like reading this piece.

Tim Ryerson

July 1, 2012 at 8:10 AM

A nice way to start a Sunday morning, Francine! - Tim

Jayachandran Chakrapany

July 1, 2012 at 1:32 AM

''God loved the birds and invented trees .Man loved the birds and invented cages'' .thank you for your kindness and love on them .jk

The Situation

June 30, 2012 at 7:36 PM

so incomplete common you can do more. this is a great start!

Fisayo Aderounmu

June 30, 2012 at 11:07 AM

Straight and simple, Francine good piece keep your pen rolling. Cheers.

Jack Horne

June 28, 2012 at 8:27 AM

beautiful write, Francine - and one of your favourite forms, I know : ) Congrats on your wins, my friend

Richard Palmer

June 27, 2012 at 12:43 PM

comfortable view,relaxing surroundings,which I was sitting beside you,great write Francine

Steven Beesley

June 27, 2012 at 4:43 AM

What a lovely poem!

Don Johnson

June 27, 2012 at 12:19 AM

the sweetest love i never knew, walked by with air of honey dew, and left me here alive, to do, sweet thoughts of meditation...

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 27, 2012 at 12:15 AM

Francine, beautiful poem.....lovely bird song comming all over to Norway.... - oxox Anne-Lise

Keith Bickerstaffe

June 26, 2012 at 5:46 PM

Ahh... this is a lovely QUINTAIN Francine! There are few things more uplifting than bird song. Well done! Keith :)

Debbie Guzzi

June 26, 2012 at 4:07 PM

The little animals have such wonderful energy! Hope you are well and happy! Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

June 26, 2012 at 2:02 PM

I like this and I do so enjoy my birds. I especially like the cooing of the doves. Thanks for commenting on my posting. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

June 26, 2012 at 9:16 AM

Enjoyed your expressive five line poem..Those birds are just wonderful addition to a day..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2012 at 9:51 PM

short and sweet, FRancine. I just love the birds all around my house right now. I bet you have a bunch too.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

June 25, 2012 at 9:45 PM

Francine, your lovely quintain is a breath of fresh air! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Kim Merryman

June 25, 2012 at 9:14 PM

I love the picture this paints. A lovely write, Francine. Love, Kim

Mad Hu

June 25, 2012 at 9:12 PM

beautiful write

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