Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Absolve His Guilt Ca

Life can definitely be an 
auspicious time
But something is 
always going awry
Things will appear fine one 
moment then unbearable the next
The allure is strong at 
times overwhelming
His atrocious heart allowed 
no good to live in his life
He is always trying to 
assuage his own guilt
I was the great object 
of his appetency
Yet the anguish he had put me 
through was too much
I could not absolve him 
from his guilt

Contest:crazy A's
Sponsor:John Hamilton 
Date:10/9/2019

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Heather Crismond November 6, 2019 at 1:33 PM Too relatable but a fantastic write!! Congrats on your placement:) Brenda Chiri November 6, 2019 at 9:42 PM Thank you and sorry it is so relatable! But s fact st time!;)

Regina Mcintosh November 6, 2019 at 9:05 AM Congrats... Love this one :) Blessings, Gina Brenda Chiri November 6, 2019 at 9:41 PM Thank you so much Regina your visits are a welcome joy at times! Appreciate it!;)

Vijay Pandit November 4, 2019 at 6:27 AM Congrats Brenda on your superb win in John's contest. Brenda Chiri November 4, 2019 at 8:24 AM Ahh thank you Vijay so very much!;)

Sandra Adams November 3, 2019 at 7:09 PM nicely penned....congratulations on your win! :) Brenda Chiri November 3, 2019 at 7:37 PM Thank you sandy and congrats on your too win!;)

John Hamilton November 3, 2019 at 6:30 PM Well done Brenda, enjoyed this one completely, congrats on a top win, you are getting better every time! Brenda Chiri November 3, 2019 at 6:52 PM Thank you so much John!;)

John Fleming October 23, 2019 at 10:02 AM Indeed! A difficult task this..and you did ever so well. Perhaps there may be more than a just little bit of true life experience involved here? I applaud your resolve and grit, Poetess! In affection. :) john Brenda Chiri October 23, 2019 at 11:05 PM Thank you John! I really appreciate your feedback and sweet comments!;)

Elaine Perrin October 10, 2019 at 6:27 AM Awesome :-) x Brenda Chiri October 10, 2019 at 12:02 PM Elaine thx so much!;)

Regina Mcintosh October 9, 2019 at 7:32 PM This is wonderful. I tried this but it was horrible... Love yours. God bless you always, Gina Brenda Chiri October 9, 2019 at 7:45 PM Regina I'm sure yours would be amazing!;) thank you!;)

Ts Poetry October 9, 2019 at 6:24 PM You deserve an A+ Brenda Chiri October 9, 2019 at 7:45 PM Thx T!;)