Notes About The Poem

Absolutions

Listen
to the silence
adrift in the brittle sky...
I behold pointed fingers
of mute admiration

My hand
belongs to yours
in this solitude of night...
Then you show me without words
the miracle of stars

We glimpse 
her bare shoulders,
as Venus brushes her hair
It tumbles in the darkness
like a quiet snowfall



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 "Pen a Pensee" 
Resubmitted For Contest: #216
Sponsor: Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/14/2012 11:03:00 AM
Happy weekend to you Carrie. I enjoyed reading your always amazing poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2012 9:27:00 AM
Cool lines of wonderful imagery , lovely write! Jag
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Date: 7/13/2012 5:41:00 PM
A lovely poem, Carrie. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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Date: 7/13/2012 4:57:00 PM
yes, I used to be a keen amateur astron years ago, and I gotta say the main memory imprinted from nights gazing through telescopes is the immutable silence of the vast black emptiness...wow it is a bit overwhelming....and you have captured it in this poem...an accurate picture of space, with its emptiness and its beauty....another excellent work, Carrie....me likes it muchly
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Date: 7/13/2012 3:07:00 PM
nette should love this! [Your assignment should you chose to accept it is to find the derivation of the name Mary Jane for those shoes. If not accepted the mission will self destruct in 30 seconds!!] L & L
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Date: 7/13/2012 2:22:00 PM
I absolutely love this write my friend! This is wonderful! Great Work!!
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