Absolutely Nothing

I'm just studying and learning about the Art of songwriting, which l love. lm just starting journal lyrics Here's just one l did quickly today.It's a bit dramatic but l hope you like it.

                                          Absolutely Nothing             copyright J.Elston

                                     Just no calls, just no nothing
                                      just no absolutely nothing
                                                 not a word
                                              and you knew
                                            that l was leaving,

                                               no more lies
                                               no more ties
                                                 no more 
                                         absolutely nothing

                                  and l know, and l knew
                                           it was time
                                          for me to go
       
                                           no more lies
                                           no more whys
                                  it was all a nothing show
  
                                         now's the time
                                            life is mine
                                 and l have to make the move 
                                          feeling's gone
                                            l have won
                                for there's absolutely nothing

                                       now's the time
                                          life is mine
                                your absolutely nothing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/22/2017 12:35:00 PM
well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/22/2017 12:44:00 PM
thank you for reading and for your comment.your very kind. take care. Jackie
Date: 7/20/2017 6:27:00 AM
You wrote a good song here..
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/22/2017 12:47:00 PM
many thanks for reading and for the comment. Not sure could be made into a song..lyrics a bit brutal lol..l was in one of my dramatic writing moods lol.
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