Absolute Surrender

Absolute Surrender


A world that we live in,
Belonging to desires, is it a sin ?
Can we escape its illusive grandeur ?
Do we mean profession or amateur ?
Eternal truth of life we all know,
False relations, emotions and all ego,
Gather courage and accept the fact,
Holistic approach and you are on the track,
Introspect certain letters of credence ?
Joys will multiply, feel His essence,
Kindness and truth show His way,
Love and affection do always pay,
Meaningful should be a life you live,
Nevertheless it's a take and give,
Only if you could send some sunshine,
Perfect you will get the brewed wine,
Quantum of goodness has no measure,
Reciprocate passion and then treasure,
Soul to soul links if you can build,
Then world is yours in just one blink,
Universe will appear as a melody,
Vibrant beings His unique parody,
What if He is the greatest musician ?
Xylophone, kids can percuss better than a physician,
Your being can be a perfect eonian wonder,
Zest in heart and lyrics in head, if to Him you absolutely surrender !



August 21st, 2014
For contest 'Abecedarian' by Shadow Hamilton

Ranked 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guzzi Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 6:57 PM
Nice to see this done in couplets!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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September 9, 2014 at 2:25 PM
Dr Upma, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda
Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 1:59 PM
super use of letters and nice flow Dr Upma a hard form to write in congrats on 3rd place and ty for your support
Mehta Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 5:14 AM
Nicely composed piece, Dr. Upma. congrats on the win
Johnson Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 5:21 PM
LWonderfully full and well done. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Callus Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 5:19 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Upma!! You did very well with this Abecedarian which also includes rhyme and words of wisdom! You surrender through love and total faith. // paul
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 2:45 PM
Very beautiful and wise Abecedarian poem Dr. Sharma. Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 2:09 PM
beautifully crafted as ever Dr Sharma many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Jerden Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 12:26 PM
Sweet surrender, Dr. Up! Good luck!
Devonshire Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 1:35 PM
Dear Dr. Upma, How awesome the world would be if we all surrendered our cares to Him. Surely you spent many hours creating the perfect Abecedarian for Shadow's contest. I favor the idea: "Reciprocate passion and then treasure." Bless you for giving this reader's day a treasured lift! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 9:27 AM
Well crafted and the feelings to surrender to the almighty, Dr. Upma
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