Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Free verse

Absolute Or Concrete

Blue, Bluer, Bluest…what’s blue to me? 
Far that seems too far; the sky.
Depth that seems too deep; the sea…
Ooh, sorry…it’s only the reflection of the sky on water.
Check on after sunlight…I did; the moon takes its turn;
Darkest of blue of the night casting romance in the air!
How same to my fellow human friend? I wonder.
What? Do my animal friends see blue?
Poor color vision to super color vision…electromagnetic spectrum! 
I’ll better leave this to my scientist friends to ponder upon.
Just imagine the world without blue colors…
Oh!...No conflict of conscience….no blue days, please.
Now blue waves, as I doze in a white lap, how you gently rock me.
Romantic ideas flashes in my inner mind...
Well blue eyes, don’t you think I’m right?
Lucky you, lovers drown peering into your magnificence!
Oh!...My eyes try to fathom the sharp teeth beneath the simmering 
brine ready to snatch me away from my sanctuary.
Capricious nature, how you entice me with your panoply of blues;
absolute or concrete….I’m just captured!

27/01/17
For contest: The Color blue - Revised old poems too - by Janis Thompson
Judged: 30/01/17-  N/A
For Contest Form G or Give me an NA by Broken Wings
Judged 7/02/17 Placed 5

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Constance La France February 11, 2017 at 8:04 PM Suitable congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem ~ Sunita U.D Palawon February 11, 2017 at 10:38 PM Thanks BW. :))

Sunita U.D Palawon February 8, 2017 at 1:40 AM Thanks Broken Wings for giving it a second chance and the placement. I'm glad you appreciate. Thanks for the contest and to all the winners. :))

Joanna Daniel January 28, 2017 at 4:53 AM A blue-ming poem, Sunita:) all the best:) Sunita U.D Palawon January 31, 2017 at 11:38 PM Thanks for the special words.All the best.:)

Tim Smith January 27, 2017 at 1:30 PM Absolutely blue-tiful poem Sunita U.D Palawon January 27, 2017 at 9:40 PM :D Oh we needed a new word to describe blue and you found one! Thanks for the read. :)

Daniel Turner January 27, 2017 at 11:15 AM Very entertaining write, Sunita. Good luck my friend:) Sunita U.D Palawon January 27, 2017 at 11:22 AM I'm touched by your visit and the encouraging comment. May you succeed in all your endeavours my friend. :)