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Absolute Attraction

When did you first fall in love with me... anticipation of miracle and wet wonder in her immaculate smile, A blizzard of rose petals and blood riddles swirl within my heart it seemed like an impossible question to answer, it was so long ago, yet it feels like it was just a moment ago, when did beauty become a purpose... when did passion first pulse on virgin lips... When I first felt... the impassioned poetry of your womanhood, the strike of your passion wrath upon my manhood, when I first saw... how your eyes of lioness scorch blazed a grin of gusto on my face, how you crowned me King of Virility with your ultra sweet gasps, when I realized... that my mouth of nocturnal nurture could be your medicine, that the landscape of my love would be the sanctuary of your dreamscape, I asked her with a happy urge, When did you first fall in love with me... with a dance of wilderness on her voice she answered, When your poetry gave me faith in my heart... J.A.B.

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Verlena S. Walker

Date: 2/27/2015 8:09:00 PM

Beautifully written Justin. Verlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/28/2015 7:12:00 PM

Beautifully felt Verlena...J.A.B.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/24/2015 6:33:00 PM

What causes that magnetic pull of attraction is a mystery. Everyone has something unique to offer, though there are a few desirable qualities that are universal... It sounds like you've found the perfect soul mate for you, Justin. This is lovely expressive work!

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/26/2015 8:50:00 PM

This poem, these moments evoke such pure emotions of real love in me...tears giggle in my eyes...the passion tightens around my throat as I savor this woman. She and I are a union of stars. Your comment is beautiful Kelly...J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2015 1:37:00 AM

Justin, you have such pretty poetry, plus some of the best alliteration on this site, besides my Fiance Nathan. Not that this is alliteration. Your poem above lights up my heart, cuz this is the kind of passion I have with my man. I remember the first time I felt that special connection with him. Thanks for sharing your beautiful words. Always Linda.

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/20/2015 2:55:00 AM

That my poetry keeps your heart young, and strengthens your passion is a very meaningful reward for me my beautiful Sphinx...J.A.B.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/17/2015 8:29:00 PM

Ahhhh, my kind of poetry Justin. It is tasteful yet filled with passion, curves and swerves in and out of romantic bliss! I loved it! This is going into my fav's. 7

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/18/2015 2:11:00 AM

The taste of our love is cinnamon cream, the aroma like lightning upon a rose...the curves are of wild creation Connie...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/17/2015 12:06:00 AM

By your words, the pauses in between, and the passionate expressions, I can tell your love you have and give makes its home deep in your frenzied, love-sifting soul! Incredible poetry, Justin. .keep that beautiful flame going dear! The world is eager for the glow- the lightning colors of an exciting, priceless love glory! Compliments and care to you both, and thankfulness for the gift of creativity! Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/17/2015 2:52:00 AM

As always Laura, you hone in on the delicacies of love, the nuances of my affection. The tempo of expression is vital in this poem of introspective passion. You understand the cause of love Laura...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/16/2015 4:22:00 PM

Exceptional!!So many emotions bleeding on the reader's pulse-rate.How Romantic,especially those last lines.

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/16/2015 8:22:00 PM

Charma, you breathe my poetry in so deeply...your passion is so thorough and acute...you suffer with a sweet composure for love, as I sometimes do too...we make love dynamic Charma...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/14/2015 10:09:00 AM

A blizzard of rose petals....I can picture you in that blizzard, Eagle....Lovely poem...sweet...caring....gentle...and yet...passionately fierce and commanding, as is all your work. I hope you have an amazing Valentine's Day, Justin. I hope you are deluged with love.

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/15/2015 8:39:00 PM

A storm of beautiful red, frenzied wings of rose love, its a marvelous vision...she and I command passion together, in our unique ways. My Love Muse will engulf me in extremes Eileen. I'm pleased that you like my pining lips Beloved Poetess...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/14/2015 7:37:00 PM

I love your new avatar....simply beautiful...awesomely alluring

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/14/2015 7:44:00 AM

A beautiful romantic poem. You drew me in and touched my heart. A 7 from me. Janet

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/15/2015 8:33:00 PM

To know how your Love has grown the heart...to understand how your Love makes you feel divine , that's the romance of this poem Janet...J.A.B.

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/14/2015 3:32:00 AM

Absolutely captivating write you have here, Justin...perfect imagery...one almost feels like watching the figures in front...7 salutes and more! Smiles from the land pf thousand isles...:D Kim

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/15/2015 8:25:00 PM

You are an island named Smooth Beauty Kim...the phenomenal love she and share is pure and original, however, the stars that make our heaven are seen and understood by all who know it, every person who has felt new love and it's awesome power relates Kim, thank you very much...J.A.B.