Absolute

The absolute saddest part of me was having to forget who I was In order to forget me..

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Carol Louise Moon

Date: 3/17/2022 11:51:00 AM

So, true. But DO remember the pain, and also the victory!

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/21/2022 3:15:00 AM

I wish more like these fall from your brilliant ink!!

Marcus Lattimore

Date: 5/15/2020 2:45:00 PM

That is awesome! Thanks for being so transparent.

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 3/7/2020 4:40:00 PM

Just W O W!!!! Nuff said, write on young lady : D James

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 2/26/2020 8:12:00 AM

Lovely Gabrielle...thought provoking. Vjckie

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 1/23/2020 3:13:00 PM

Another FAV for me... although this is terribly sad- and I hope that you aren't still in this place! The "you" that shines through your poetry is beautiful and radiant... I think the struggle we face is cutting through all the layers of other identities that people have piled on us over the years, and getting back to that pure child essence of who we were (and still are, on some level). Hope that made sense & didn't sound too woo-woo! Take care, my lovely friend! ;)