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Premiere Contest WinnerAbsinthe Leaves

In the firmament of trees
October's eye
looks down in cruel azure
on summer's absinthe leaves,
flocking like survivors
to a mortal haven.
Autumn's blood magma
creeps through leaves
bequeathing fire 
and brittle amber. 
Fertile frost breeds
in arctic prisms,
whispering feral eddas
as withering violets
echo bitter truth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcmanes Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Wonderful imagery, enjoyed the read RD
Cozart Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Thank you, RD.
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June 29, 2018 at 2:00 AM
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Waters Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 1:21 AM
Fizzing with energy - indeed to be faved. Salutations on win
Cozart Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Thanks, Virginia!
Warrior Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Nicely written my friend...congrats on your win Dale...love and light...^WW^
Cozart Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Thanks, WW.
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Awesome imagery. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Thanks much, Line!
Barden Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:31 AM
Superb write, my friend, and a worthy winner - enjoyed every syllable and phrase, and I must fav this one! Love the art, too! Blessings, my poet brother - keep up the great work!
Cozart Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thanks so much, Greg.
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 1:51 PM
wow Dale no wonder Brian loved this little gem so much your imagery is so so amazing. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Ashley Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 11:56 PM
Wow! Dale, the beauty and depth of your imagery takes my breath away. The contrast between blood magma and fertile frost is striking. Your last two lines are superb in response to the preceding lines. An exquisite write and a fav! Congratulations on your most excellent win! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Thanks so much, Susan.
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