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Absence

absence meadowlark takes flight a hawk trills up in the sky~ lone wings pleased a sky 2023 January 30

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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/31/2023 1:26:00 PM
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Swooped down for the kill William, only one outcome here, absence indeed in a pleased sky, your Haiku silently screams from above, cheers David
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/31/2023 7:40:00 PM
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David, kudos to the aha instant infusion, Aloha William
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Sotto Poet
Date: 1/31/2023 6:45:00 AM
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Wonderful Haiku, William. You have taken a magnificent picture of the hawks soaring in the sky.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/31/2023 7:37:00 AM
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Thanks, Lassad, for sharing your interpretation, Aloha William
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 1/31/2023 3:16:00 AM
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lone wings pleased a sky WOW ! Have Good Days
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/31/2023 7:41:00 AM
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Anisha, meadowlark the absence, Aloha William

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