Above the Ocean Path

" .... can you hear the bells ? ... "
             ~~~   ~~~


I trudge along the ocean path
up the hill to the promenade.
Above the crashing waves I stand,
then memories, my thoughts, invade.

Behind me, white and old, as I,
the abandoned church beckons me.
It says " do you remember when?"
"Think back ... what do you see?"

I remember lilacs blooming
and music from inside,
when this was a church full of life,
when I became a bride.

But now the lilacs fade from sight,
a deserted shell is all I see.
There is no music playing.
Sadness settles over me.

The curtains blow through broken panes.
They billow in the breeze
as if they're trying to escape
out to the beckoning seas.

Once upon a time we were
Alive ! , this church and I.
But we are old and empty now
and ready now to die.


           ~~~   ~~~
"behind the church is a promenade
     they call the Widows Walk"




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    23/09/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mcdonald Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Ohhhhh...this one was full of a heady mix of emotions. Wonderful!!
Roberts Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 9:51 PM
thanks Aura Lee, the contest that it was originally entered in , it won first place and Constance sent me a lovely certificate, which I still have
Jubenville Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 10:55 PM
Beautiful lines Francine, nicely written poem, love it.... All the best to you.. Ellie... Xoxoxo
Eastman Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 1:30 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is one of my favorites.
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 1:36 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest of Joyce "My Favorite" Francine. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 5:16 AM
congrats on a splendid win for this beautiful poem Francine .. lovely lines and the ocean is my favorite place ..
Ramage Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 10:14 PM
This is so touching, however I would say you are too young to consider dying. Well done, beautiful poem. Really enjoyed this. Its my anniversary this weekend, so appropriate. Lee
Merryman Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 8:24 PM
I remember this one, Francine. Congrats on your win! I enjoyed reading it again. Love, Kim
Poet Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 12:04 PM
Love this Francine!Beautiful poem.Congrats on your win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 4:08 AM
This is lovely Francine I would have placed it at the top . love it xx
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September 7, 2012 at 8:17 PM
Francine, congratulations, in Joyce's favorite contest... good night~ PD
Bauer Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 4:33 PM
i hope you have many more years of poetry writing left in you - this is a wonderful poem! congrats on your win.
Johnson Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 4:02 PM
I love rhyme and I love this rhyme. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Love, Joyce
Pettit Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations to you if this won in the contest. Well written material.
Stinson Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 9:53 PM
I was completely taken aback. I did not expect the turn of events. Quite gripping.
Ramage Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 11:52 PM
Congratulations Francine on your win. Well done. Its just so beautiful. Lee
Fassbender Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:35 PM
Beautiful first place win, Francine!!! Lovely!!!
Johnson Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 6:36 PM
Breathe some life into your body, rise an walk a mile with me, perhaps, yes the dampers soddy, needs more campoven coals you see, :) (drovers bread) Great win babe, very well done, but sadly too, need some coals put under you, inciting to lighten the mood...love...Don
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 5:05 PM
Congrats Francine on your wonderful first place win so well deserved my friend...luv..
Flach Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Beautifully sad. Great rhyme and meter. I simply love your poetry, Francine - thought it was about time I let you know. Nice job.
Johnson Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 4:44 PM
Congratulaitons Francine on your win with this intense poem,. Love, Joyce
Merryman Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Beautiful poem, Francine. Congrats on your 1st place win! Kim
Quigley Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 11:58 AM
Beautifully written Francine. Congratulations on taking a well deserved first place.
Haick Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 11:53 AM
This is truly beautiful! Congratulations on your very deserving win, Francine. Love, Annalise
Richards Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 10:46 AM
Beautifully written, with such a melancholy and sad tone. What a lovely poem this is! Congratulations!
Lane Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:18 AM
Great work in the contest. Congratulations on your win. Tony
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