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Above the Ocean Path

" .... can you hear the bells ? ... " ~~~ ~~~ I trudge along the ocean path up the hill to the promenade. Above the crashing waves I stand, then memories, my thoughts, invade. Behind me, white and old, as I, the abandoned church beckons me. It says " do you remember when?" "Think back ... what do you see?" I remember lilacs blooming and music from inside, when this was a church full of life, when I became a bride. But now the lilacs fade from sight, a deserted shell is all I see. There is no music playing. Sadness settles over me. The curtains blow through broken panes. They billow in the breeze as if they're trying to escape out to the beckoning seas. Once upon a time we were Alive ! , this church and I. But we are old and empty now and ready now to die. ~~~ ~~~ "behind the church is a promenade they call the Widows Walk" ~~~ ~~~ ~~~ ~~~ ~~~ ~~~ 23/09/2011

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Date: 6/6/2016 5:58:00 PM
Ohhhhh...this one was full of a heady mix of emotions. Wonderful!!
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Francine Roberts
Date: 6/6/2016 9:51:00 PM
thanks Aura Lee, the contest that it was originally entered in , it won first place and Constance sent me a lovely certificate, which I still have
Date: 12/17/2013 10:55:00 PM
Beautiful lines Francine, nicely written poem, love it.... All the best to you.. Ellie... Xoxoxo
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Date: 9/12/2012 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is one of my favorites.
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Date: 9/10/2012 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest of Joyce "My Favorite" Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2012 5:16:00 AM
congrats on a splendid win for this beautiful poem Francine .. lovely lines and the ocean is my favorite place ..
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Date: 9/8/2012 10:14:00 PM
This is so touching, however I would say you are too young to consider dying. Well done, beautiful poem. Really enjoyed this. Its my anniversary this weekend, so appropriate. Lee
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Date: 9/8/2012 8:24:00 PM
I remember this one, Francine. Congrats on your win! I enjoyed reading it again. Love, Kim
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Date: 9/8/2012 12:04:00 PM
Love this Francine!Beautiful poem.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/8/2012 4:08:00 AM
This is lovely Francine I would have placed it at the top . love it xx
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Date: 9/7/2012 8:17:00 PM
Francine, congratulations, in Joyce's favorite contest... good night~ PD
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Date: 9/7/2012 4:33:00 PM
i hope you have many more years of poetry writing left in you - this is a wonderful poem! congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/7/2012 4:02:00 PM
I love rhyme and I love this rhyme. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/4/2012 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations to you if this won in the contest. Well written material.
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Date: 11/23/2011 9:53:00 PM
I was completely taken aback. I did not expect the turn of events. Quite gripping.
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Date: 10/5/2011 11:52:00 PM
Congratulations Francine on your win. Well done. Its just so beautiful. Lee
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:35:00 PM
Beautiful first place win, Francine!!! Lovely!!!
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Date: 10/5/2011 6:36:00 PM
Breathe some life into your body, rise an walk a mile with me, perhaps, yes the dampers soddy, needs more campoven coals you see, :) (drovers bread) Great win babe, very well done, but sadly too, need some coals put under you, inciting to lighten the mood...love...Don
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Date: 10/5/2011 5:05:00 PM
Congrats Francine on your wonderful first place win so well deserved my friend...luv..
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Date: 10/5/2011 4:48:00 PM
Beautifully sad. Great rhyme and meter. I simply love your poetry, Francine - thought it was about time I let you know. Nice job.
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Date: 10/5/2011 4:44:00 PM
Congratulaitons Francine on your win with this intense poem,. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/5/2011 12:47:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Francine. Congrats on your 1st place win! Kim
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Date: 10/5/2011 11:58:00 AM
Beautifully written Francine. Congratulations on taking a well deserved first place.
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Date: 10/5/2011 11:53:00 AM
This is truly beautiful! Congratulations on your very deserving win, Francine. Love, Annalise
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Date: 10/5/2011 10:46:00 AM
Beautifully written, with such a melancholy and sad tone. What a lovely poem this is! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:18:00 AM
Great work in the contest. Congratulations on your win. Tony
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