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Moonrise at the end of an infinite desert highway, Whispering to you while a delicate evening sighs, Or, peering out from behind mighty obsidian anvils, She delights and surprises in immensity, an all-seeing eye. The pale-faced moon of Shakespeare, looking bloody on the field, The cannonball of Ansel Adams, fired into our imaginations forever, The waterfalling lunar light, joining in with the river, Every shade of new beginning and surrender. The all hushed winter landscape as the Goddess walks higher, The moon of the mountains, her light a potent force in the thin, clear air, All trees traced out in finery, richened in silhouette against her, Living out the night as apparitions. When she is kissing the ground, speaking to you through the same air You're breathing, listen for the velvet rustling of her pink robe, Or see the tropical moon among clouds as busy as the waves below, The golden light of Heaven pouring down, filling footprints in the sand. If ever we meet I will greet you with gladness For I too love the moon.

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Date: 3/1/2017 12:49:00 PM
The moon does have magic Doug. Your entry and words prove that. What a lovely image you attached for us readers to see. All is well within this poetic entry. You grace us with imagery.
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Date: 1/6/2017 2:21:00 PM
Really enjoyed this, thanks Doug. EM.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 1/6/2017 4:20:00 PM
Cheers, Edward. Gracias.
Date: 1/1/2017 5:39:00 PM
wow, the pink robe image is fantastic. Very lovely, Doug.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 1/3/2017 8:04:00 AM
Pink moons are not common enough!
Date: 1/1/2017 5:39:00 PM
are you a dad? That was my captcha!!
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Doug Vinson
Date: 1/2/2017 11:40:00 AM
Andrea, no - no kids. Got married fairly late, age 41, but have a lot of nieces and nephews, and my wife's a teacher - to an extent we "have" a lot of kids each year.,
Date: 12/31/2016 12:20:00 AM
I don't think the moon is cold at all. It softens the all too brightness of daylight. I love to be at the beach in moonlight, footprintes in the sand, one set of them...
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Darren White
Date: 12/31/2016 4:23:00 AM
yep, you got that totally right there....
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/31/2016 1:19:00 AM
I think of the sun as overly bright, burning, hot, male, strident, not good at hearing beyond itself.
Date: 12/30/2016 8:22:00 AM
It never ceases to amaze me how something so cold and so lifeless as the moon. Can arouse such passion and fan the flames of creativity. Love the water falling lunar light and the reference to Ansel Adams. Very nice write sir, very nice indeed.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/30/2016 1:44:00 PM
Thank you, Edward! That's just it - the amazement, age-old for us people on earth.
Date: 12/30/2016 6:43:00 AM
This was beautiful Doug. I like how you have captured the mystique of the moon in many different lights. Our evening companion, always there waiting. I am enchanted by the moon and poetry about the moon. Really nice my friend.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/30/2016 1:42:00 PM
Thanks, Chris. If the moon was close enough, I'd just kiss her.
Date: 12/29/2016 8:29:00 PM
Lovely, Doug!
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/29/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. : ) This moon thing.... is serious.

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