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About the Moon

Moonrise at the end of an infinite desert highway,
Whispering to you while a delicate evening sighs,
Or, peering out from behind mighty obsidian anvils,
She delights and surprises in immensity, an all-seeing eye.

The pale-faced moon of Shakespeare, looking bloody on the field,
The cannonball of Ansel Adams, fired into our imaginations forever,
The waterfalling lunar light, joining in with the river,
Every shade of new beginning and surrender.

The all hushed winter landscape as the Goddess walks higher,
The moon of the mountains, her light a potent force in the thin, clear air,
All trees traced out in finery, richened in silhouette against her,
Living out the night as apparitions.

When she is kissing the ground, speaking to you through the same air
You're breathing, listen for the velvet rustling of her pink robe,
Or see the tropical moon among clouds as busy as the waves below,
The golden light of Heaven pouring down, filling footprints in the sand.

If ever we meet I will greet you with gladness
For I too love the moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ricci Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 12:49 PM
The moon does have magic Doug. Your entry and words prove that. What a lovely image you attached for us readers to see. All is well within this poetic entry. You grace us with imagery.
Micheals Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 2:21 PM
Really enjoyed this, thanks Doug. EM.
Vinson Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 4:20 PM
Cheers, Edward. Gracias.
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2017 at 5:39 PM
are you a dad? That was my captcha!!
Vinson Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 11:40 AM
Andrea, no - no kids. Got married fairly late, age 41, but have a lot of nieces and nephews, and my wife's a teacher - to an extent we "have" a lot of kids each year.,
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2017 at 5:39 PM
wow, the pink robe image is fantastic. Very lovely, Doug.
Vinson Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Pink moons are not common enough!
White Avatar
December 31, 2016 at 12:20 AM
I don't think the moon is cold at all. It softens the all too brightness of daylight. I love to be at the beach in moonlight, footprintes in the sand, one set of them...
White Avatar
December 31, 2016 at 4:23 AM
yep, you got that totally right there....
Vinson Avatar
December 31, 2016 at 1:19 AM
I think of the sun as overly bright, burning, hot, male, strident, not good at hearing beyond itself.
Mccall Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 8:22 AM
It never ceases to amaze me how something so cold and so lifeless as the moon. Can arouse such passion and fan the flames of creativity. Love the water falling lunar light and the reference to Ansel Adams. Very nice write sir, very nice indeed.
Vinson Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 1:44 PM
Thank you, Edward! That's just it - the amazement, age-old for us people on earth.
Green Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 6:43 AM
This was beautiful Doug. I like how you have captured the mystique of the moon in many different lights. Our evening companion, always there waiting. I am enchanted by the moon and poetry about the moon. Really nice my friend.
Vinson Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 1:42 PM
Thanks, Chris. If the moon was close enough, I'd just kiss her.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 8:29 PM
Lovely, Doug!
Vinson Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 9:01 PM
Thanks, Kim. : ) This moon thing.... is serious.
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