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About An Orphan

In comfort next to you mother, fifteen Christmas I spent with you, in time’s orchards fruits picked together, those fruits now bitter without you! Tears that run down my pillow, are tears that will not dry, With years hope heart will mellow, I shall try not to cry! ‘In praise of the Ode’poetry contest 2nd placement sponsor nette onclaud topic 3 about an orphan 8 lines 6 words each!

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Date: 10/16/2020 6:58:00 PM
a sad one. I enjoyed seeing this on the winner list, Krish. Congrats.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/16/2020 11:33:00 PM
Andrea Thank you! Always a pleasure to have your visit and your words of support. :)
Date: 10/16/2020 2:43:00 PM
Your poem tugs the heart--congrats on your podium win, Krish.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/16/2020 2:57:00 PM
Thanks Vijay! our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thoughts! Thanks for your visit and your very kind comment.
Date: 10/16/2020 12:22:00 PM
Please pass the kleenex, Krish. What a heart wrenching story - a very real picture of the grieving process. Congratulations on your win!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/16/2020 12:24:00 PM
Thanks Sam, my friend! value, cherish your kind words!
Date: 10/16/2020 5:54:00 AM
I want to shed a tear for this Krish. Very touching. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/16/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thanks Linda! pain of an orphan only an orphan will know. We must reach out when we can!
Date: 10/9/2020 11:12:00 PM
Wow, you make me feel your pain.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/10/2020 5:50:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer! So happy you stopped by and read my poem!:)
Date: 10/6/2020 5:16:00 PM
Endearing, Krish, beautifully written, Aloha! William
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/6/2020 6:56:00 PM
Thanks William! delighted with your visit and your words!:)

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