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Abiding Truth

   Practice rhymes with cactus
      piano, with woe

   Those who've suffered
      surely know

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Shirley Hawkins

February 25, 2024 at 7:17 PM

And HOW! But the melody lingers on.

Bill Baker

February 24, 2024 at 10:03 PM

Witty and fun poetry, today, gw. Thanks for sharing your insights with us through your poetry, my friend. BB

Michael Tor

February 24, 2024 at 8:21 PM

Clever and Witty as always you are...

Gershon Wolf

February 25, 2024 at 6:00 PM

Supportive and encouraging, as you always are. thanks, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

February 24, 2024 at 11:45 AM

Practice is painful, just ask the tendons in my wrist! Ouch! But still I write…

Gershon Wolf

February 25, 2024 at 6:00 PM

Playing through the pain, eh? I guess that's why you get paid the 'big bucks.'

Mrs. Yolanda Joy Nicholsen

February 24, 2024 at 4:27 AM

Indeed what a fruited write . Blessings

Gershon Wolf

February 25, 2024 at 6:02 PM

Tangy cactus fruit - some call it dessert...

Jerry Brotherton

February 23, 2024 at 5:56 PM

brilliant word play, my friend.

Gershon Wolf

February 25, 2024 at 6:05 PM

Thanks, Jerry.

Joe Maverick

February 23, 2024 at 12:55 PM

Oh my toe..' Yes its truth..Some..Though they can't Abide it..' In fact they do deride it ' Not their Truth I here add.' Just in case you may think me Predjudiced..' Which I am by the way.! I do like a Real story, that portrays as many facts as possible..You see I'm a bad one, what can be Done.?