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Abiding

All the sorrow and pain
Breaking hearts, falling rain
Inspiring feelings so dismal
Dark doubts that are abysmal
It is almost like a sensation
Nothing alive in creation
Grieves like this degradation




A Forms and Words Challenge Poetry Contest
Acrostic - Abiding
Sponsored by Sotto Poet
February 24, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on your win Gina! Lovely piece.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your "Abiding" write. Have a wonderful day......................
Poet Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 10:15 AM
Gina, outstanding work, and many compliments on your win in my Writing Challenge - A Words and Forms. Blessings.
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 4:25 PM
very well done and unique for this theme, Regina.
Lane Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 12:32 AM
Expressions from a sorrowful heart. Beautifully written, Gina.
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